Chapter 2: god why did u drop this... I'm crying

Tbh, this is the first time I've become attached to characters in a fanfic...

please.... add some chapters

Chapter 2: This is a really interesting story. And the dynamic and parallels between Lay and Irene are also great.

Chapter 2: What did I just read.

I need more.

This is new to me and the fact that irene and lay are my bias only contributes so little to it.

Setting that aside, this has been a really enjoyable ride for me and I wish to stay until its over, really. You're a great driver.

Damn, I really like the chemistry of layirene they seem like two peas in a pod.

Can’t wait to see what happens next

Chapter 1: Hey I upvoted and subscribed to this before reading cuz I know this is gonna be great since I've read your other story. Sorry for being late. I mean super late .

Chapter 1: ♥︎

I’M SO LATE BUT—

this chapter is brilliant!! joohyun is so adorable (“hell yes. damn. .” lolol) and i absolutely loved how you’re slowly revealing parts of the true her throughout the entire chapter.

there’s this line i really loved: “Missing is missing when someone wants to be found. Joohyun doesn’t want to be found. She wants to find.” the situation is pretty twisted but it’s really nice to see their dynamic and how joohyun is pulling out of her shell.

BUT LET ME TALK ABOUT A TATTOOED YIXING FOR A MOMENT LIKE T_T I’M CRYING WHY IS HE SO HOT

“He blinks at her and then grins mischievously, displaying his dimples” I’M WEAK

okay again about the dynamics now that i’m further into the chapter. it’s weird because like you said, yixing did kidnap her but he gives her a lot of opportunities to go and she chooses to stay and i really like how the choice to go has (mostly) always been up to her

bUT “I’m a stripper. I worked in a company before. But that was boring so to rebel, I stripped. It’s a good money and I love dancing. And my body is not that bad.” !!!!!!!!!! IDEK WHAT TO SAY ANYMORE I’M DEAD

i love love love the conversations you wrote in this chapter (“Petal.” “Kidnapper.” “Why are we still whispering?”) and i’m really interested to see what happens next especially now that there’s more of a connection between joohyun and yixing (relationship wise but also that fact that they’re both upper class people on the run)

this is also more random but i was just very impressed by the little details you added (when when joohyun was looking at the ecomart building) because it helps the reader to visualize your world better. it’s something i really need to improve on haha because i don’t really describe things at all haha

GREAT CHAPTER I LOVE IT AND I WISH I COULD UPVOTE MANY TIMES

Chapter 2: Another enjoyable chapter! Nice gems among their dialogue. Thanks for the update!^^

*whispers* will definitely not mind badly if Yixing *cough* strips *cough*. Haha

Chapter 2: This is beautiful. I like their conversations so much haha. I almost choked when he said he stripped lmao anyways so he's a heir too,interesting...

Chapter 1: Your writing is wonderful, and I'm really enjoying the story so far. I gotta say, I started dying at the she almost said hi to his muscles line lmao. Excited for the rest of the story!