Chapter I, Part 1

Goodbye, Paradise
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Skye       April "Skye, when can I read the next chapter?” Skye West paused, looking away from the screen of her cash register and over at Liz, her coworker, who was busying herself with stocking the bar.   “Liz,” she began. “We’ve been working the same shifts for the past nine years. You’ve asked me this same question for the past nine years, and what do I always tell you?” Liz sighed, rolling her big hazel eyes.   “I can read when it’s published,” she said in a monotone.   “Okay then.”   “But…technically you are published, right? Doesn’t that count?”   “Kire Na is published; C r u s h is not published.”   “But it will be!” Liz countered earnestly.   “It doesn’t count, Liz.”   “It’s so fascinating, though,” Liz said wistfully. “Your relationship with Kaito is so beautiful.”   “It’s loosely based.”   “I don’t need the manga to show me that much.” Skye rolled her eyes, shaking her head.   “When it’s been published, feel free to read,” she told her. “But until then, I don’t know what to tell you.”   “Fine, fine; whatever.” Skye laughed. There was a pause in their conversation as they stopped to take care of a customer and then they went back to what they were doing.   “So, have you and Dave set a date yet?” Liz and her longtime boyfriend Dave had gotten engaged on Valentine’s Day of that year, and she wore a Claddagh ring, given to her by Dave (on her left hand, heart pointed outward), to represent it.   “Probably August.”   “’Probably’?” Skye repeated. “Liz, August is four months away; there shouldn’t be any ‘probably’ about it.”   “It’s no big deal,” Liz said with a shrug. “We’re just gonna go down to Santa Cruz and do it on the beach with, like, 25 people. Then we’ll go to that Italian place on Seabright Ave that I told you about; it’s not gonna be some big, over the top ceremony.”   “Have you thought about the honeymoon?” Liz’s face lit up.   “Island hopping and surfing in Hawaii,” she answered. “Two weeks of fun in the sun.” Skye laughed.   “That sounds about right.”   “I don’t really care about a ceremony,” Liz admitted. “I would’ve been fine just going to City Hall and IHOP, but Dave wanted to do a little something, at least, so we could have the pictures and ‘show them to our grandkids’.”   “That’s really thoughtful of him.”   “Yeah,” Liz said with a shrug, smiling. “I just can’t wait until we get to Hawaii.” Skye smirked, shaking her head. She was four hours into her five hour shift when a young woman entered the Coffee Bar, of an average height with brown, violet streaked hair and gray green eyes, framed by tortoiseshell glasses; she was dressed simply in a Kingdom Hearts T-shirt, jeans and black Vans, a messenger bag draped across her chest.   “Welcome to the Coffee Bar,” Skye called out to her. “What can I get for you?”   “Hi,” the girl greeted her, walking up to the counter. “I’m here looking for Sora Nakamura, the mangaka? I have an interview to do with her; has she come in?”   “Oh,” Skye said with a smile. “Well…you’re looking at her.” The girl’s eyebrows rose in surprise.   “Really?” Skye nodded, and her face lit up. “I’m Natalie, with USAnime magazine; it’s so ni
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oceansofxo
#1
Chapter 13: Sweet. I like how you show glimpses of all the characters lives randomly. Kaito is right. There is no need to rush.
Lotuspassion #2
Chapter V part 2 I can’t say anything I would’ve been eager to move in as well ☺️
oceansofxo
#3
Chapter 12: But Naiara, just pushed Matthew away instead of asking him about this "other woman". She just literally has poor communication skills. If you want to know something just ask. You don't let it just slip through your hands without knowing the truth.

I swear she is so muleheaded. She letting thought and not proof get in her way. Really, she is getting in her own way.
oceansofxo
#4
Chapter 11: Great! This update was sweet. I like how her relationship with her soon to be in laws has progressed in a very positive way. You see Sumire and Takeshi, Black girls don't bite.

I like the progression of the mothers relationship as well. It is very nice when the matriarchs can have a congenial relationship as well. I really like this family gathering. It is so important to be good to each other. Welcome back Authornim. It has been a pretty good while since "I seent" ya in these streets.
Yoongi1230 #5
Chapter 8: Dammmnit I was getting excited to get to the nxt chapter!!! Keep going I love their story!!!
oceansofxo
#6
Chapter 7: Sweet. They getting married. I was thinking this was a new story. Then I realized you my dear authornim hasn't updated in quite some time. Nonetheless, this was a good update.
Sharo001
716 streak #7
Chapter 6: I don't believe Matthew is cheating (too easy under the circumstances IMO), but there is definitely something going on. He needs to open up, and Nai needs to stop jumping to conclusions. Communication is the key. :)
oceansofxo
#8
Chapter 6: I think Naiara needs to ask Matthew instead of speculating. Even though gut instincts are the truth. He could be. But who knows?