Beautiful (Wheesa)

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"Hyejin-ah... Sometimes do you just think about what you would be doing right now if we didn't become singers?" The puppy-like girl turned her head to face her Best Friend. When she got the attention of her Friend, she sat up herself up crossed-legged. "Or if you never saw me sing that day in the coin karaoke? Or... if we did not even meet each other at all?" "Wheeinie? Why do you think like that? Aren't you happy now?" Hwasa replied, head cocked to the side out of the confusion she had towards her friend's random question. "I am! I mean, I'm living my dream job! And our Moomoos... I can never be happier! But... sometimes I really worry over small things. Haha... thinking about... it's really stupid. Forget about okay?" Wheein said, giving a small laugh. Hwasa was so confused. She has been friends with Wheein for very Long now, and knew that Wheein was never one to care about the 'what if's and did what her heart told her to, and it puzzled the short-haired girl greatly as to why she was doing it now. "Wheein-ah, tell me what's running through your head now, I'll give you a penny for every one of your thoughts!" Hwasa said, jokingly tapping on Wheein's head while saying it. The slightly older girl laughed, before sighing (something that was rare for the puppy) and lying back down on the wooden bench placed on the roof, staring at the unusually starry night sky. "Hyejinie, am I a bother? A burden? Why would you like me? I mean, I'm not that pretty, nor funny or smart, or that good at singing, Yongsun unnie is better at that, and I can't rap no matter how much I want to, or try to, and, and.." The stacked up insecurities of the older girl poured out one by one, and with each one, a tear rolled out of her glistening eyes. Hwasa stopped her right there, wiping all of the tears off her face and grabbing the girl into a comforting hug. However, no matter how much Hwasa tried to shush the older girl, Wheein kept mumbling into Hwasa's shoulder about the things that could have, or would have taken place if a certain event had happened or not. "Wheein-ah," The younger girl said while her hair, "Jung Wheen, you idiot! Why are you so cute! Aigoo... how Long have you been keeping this to yourself for you to explode like this... you should have told me... I would tell you the reasons that I became friends with you every single time, just to relieve you of these thoughts every single time, because you are worth it. So next time, instead of keeping it to yourself, tell me, if not the unnies, and don't torture yourself like this okay you dummy?" A very muffled "6 months" could be heard from the head hidden in the crook of Hwasa's neck and a nod was felt soon after. "Aigoo... as expected! Our Wheein who answered questions very well! Hehe" Hwasa giggled at how even though she was now sobbing, Wheein still answered all the questions directed to her. "So can... can you answer why you are friends with me now? Because I'm not worth liking, I'm just a burden to everyone around me..." Wheein said, still hugging her Friend. Hwasa instantly pulled her away from the position that Wheein was finding very comfortable before Hwasa shook her shoulders

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Hey! I know I haven’t updated this in a long time but I’ve recently started a full update! Not a ADITL but a whole one couple centric One-shot! (Pst it’s not Moonsun)

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Honeyoong93
#1
Chapter 3: Ahhh wheesa mereka emang precious :*
ThatOneBi
#2
Chapter 1: Omo~
yongwhee
#3
Chapter 26: This is so cuuuuuuute im meltinggggg
Cdival #4
Chapter 10: Chapter 10: I know I'm reading this waaaaay after you posted it, but I just wanted to say that I really liked what you talked about..I mean, your note!...all of it, but specially the fourth point...but I liked all that you said... like very, very much!
cjmoo_ #5
Chapter 25: Woohoo! Thank you for writing this for Mamamoo's 4th anniversary~ I like the fact that this chapter is about them reminiscing the most memorable past.

Oo wow, I wouldn't have known that Wheein's memory was an actual one if you hadn't mentioned it at the end. (A fail fan here: I haven't finished watching Secret Unnie >.<) Knowing that it's really what Wheein went though, it makes this story more melancholic. She's been through so much these past 4 years (and more). That shade though ahaha: 'This group was her dream group, there was no other group that she could every try being in apart from this one- albeit a better name could've been chosen, but she takes what she can get.' I like how amidst the worries and concerns she had after their debut performances, she still looked at the positive side which kept her going.

I really like how Hwasa's memories is basically of Wheein, but it's inevitable since they spent almost all their lives together. Hwasa's memory is too cute. (Have you watched the Life Bar episode where Wheesa appeared on it? They did say that they probably know each other more than their parents do!) It's nice that Hwasa appreciates the contrasting personalities she and Wheein have. It definitely made their friendship more meaningful.

Byul's memory is just so full of insecurities that it hurts reading it. Another shade there ahaha: 'Yes, for the first time, she was in her own house.' - I choked a little! I love the way you ended Byul's memory with this line: 'They had made a moment she would have wanted to forget, into a moment she knew she had to remember for the rest of her life, and she didn't know how to repay them.' I'm so glad that her members didn't leave her alone to her thoughts and insecurities.

Of course Solar's memory would be linked to her role as the leader. I think in general, throughout all of their memories, no matter how different they are, it all comes back to the main point on how the four of them stuck through everything together. They became each other's supports whether or not they know it. They stepped up to the occasion when they're needed to do so, and seeing how the four of them recognised this fact makes my heart feel warm.

Just two comments on your writing: I felt that the ending was rather abrupt, seeing how there's an introduction paragraph but not an ending one. Also, most of the paragraphs are rather lengthy. The paragraphs could be split to become shorter ones so that it's easier to be read.

Thank you very much for writing this! :)
Pringletip
#6
Chapter 9: What the. Noooooo Yongsun-ahhhhh
Pringletip
#7
Chapter 3: This is cute <3
cjmoo_ #8
Chapter 24: Comments for Teasing: Ugh Byul's such a loser ahahahah but aww I like how heartwarming this story is at the end. That last paragraph is everything! Interesting that we get to see the different reactions of the members. For some reason through their reaction I could feel their love for Byul too, expressed in their own ways. :') I get the feeling Byul is certain of her members' love for her, and so she was comfortable teasing them. :') (Also, I can almost hear Yongsun's "ISANGHAE!" haha!)
Comments for The Sun: I am such a er for imagery and I think you've beautifully brought out the actual sun/Yongsun imagery through Byul's POV. I really like how when the sun is not visible being covered by rain clouds, another sun appears to bring light to Byul's life. Seems like this story isn't complete though! I guess we'll never know what happens between Byul and Yongsun. Interesting how I could hear Byul's turmoil.
Thank you for this update! :)
cjmoo_ #9
Chapter 23: Welcome back! I enjoyed reading both stories.
In Lucky, I really liked seeing how greasy Byul can be at one point, and the next moment she becomes very sincere.
Azegag is too cute and funny xD
cjmoo_ #10
Chapter 23: Nooo :'(
I like how you wrote Byulyi's answer as one whole chunk and making it sound forced. Seemed like she has been feeling that way for a long time :/
Hope the rest supports Hyejin as well, especially if she continues having that image of Byul in her head :/