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Solar looked up from her book at she heard bells ringing, signalling that someone had just entered the cafe. And in walked a short black or dark brown, for it was too far for her to tell exactly what colour it was, haired girl. She had a mole on her right cheek and something worthy of mentioning, a face with perfect makeup. Like her makeup was…. What do they call it nowadays? On fleek? And now we all know that Solar was not very updated on nowaday trends... Anyway, Solar’s eyes gleamed with anticipation, lips curled up into a small smile, hoping that it was the girl that was 20 minutes late for their meeting, though she really did not expect the girl to look… so fierce? Should she put it that way? Charismatic! That’s the word! The smile dropped from her face within a second once the stranger turned away from from her, a beautiful smile which gave of a very childish and innocent vibe gracing her face as she bounded into the arms of an ash-brown haired girl who also had an equally charming smile, kind of resembling a hamster. Looking down at her book again, a frown replacing the smile once on her face as she thought about what her mystery girl was up to that she was so late. It cannot be that... that she stood Solar up right? For being too concerned about meeting up and only being able to talk about that for the past few days, maybe even weeks? Putting the book on the table, she picked up her phone and turned it on. “Still no messages… Did something happen to her? Aish, I will just message her first, no point sitting in here alone and looking like an idiot. “Wheein-ah… Where are you?” Once she sent that message she semi-threw the phone on the table, display screen facing down, not being able to read her replies in case she got tricked and that Wheein would not even show up. She picked up her book, hiding her face behind it as the bell rang again. “Did anyone see me? Aish, I bet I looked stupid.” she thought to herself, face turning a shade of light pink. She peeked out from the side of her book at the new customer, a small glimmer of hope that it would be the girl that she is looking for.

Now, some of you might be wondering why Solar doesn’t know how Wheein looks like but knows her name right? Well, one day, Solar was ranting about how her boyfriend had ended things over a text message, yes, 1! text message. She wanted to send it to her friend but ended up messaging a stranger instead because she typed in the wrong number. And that was her first conversation with the energetic girl over text message. Who would know that the girl she mistakenly ended up messaging would end up to be her best friend… and her crush? Yeah, Solar has a crush on a girl she had never seen before, sue her! The cheerful and bright character of her online friend made her fall for her, hard. It was like Wheein completed Solar. Wheein was bright and optimistic while Solar was introverted and pessimistic. Solar misses Wheein if they did not message each other for the whole day. Day by day, her crush just gets deeper. Because Solar’s friends are similar to her, they all told her that they should not have broken up, that he was a ‘good catch’ just because he was the typical rich and hot guy, while Wheein, still a stranger then mind you, told her that there were plenty of fish in the sea and that anyone that would mess with her would probably regret it, seeing how aggressive her text was to her friends. Solar just felt like disappearing from the world when the stranger had messaged her back saying that whoever had let her go was an idiot who deserved a slap to the face. Despite the amount of embarrassment given to her because of that reply, it was the first day she smiled since her breakup. She slowly started to get over her breakup with the daily messages from Wheein telling her to be strong and show him how well she could do wit

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Hey! I know I haven’t updated this in a long time but I’ve recently started a full update! Not a ADITL but a whole one couple centric One-shot! (Pst it’s not Moonsun)

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Honeyoong93
#1
Chapter 3: Ahhh wheesa mereka emang precious :*
ThatOneBi
#2
Chapter 1: Omo~
yongwhee
#3
Chapter 26: This is so cuuuuuuute im meltinggggg
Cdival #4
Chapter 10: Chapter 10: I know I'm reading this waaaaay after you posted it, but I just wanted to say that I really liked what you talked about..I mean, your note!...all of it, but specially the fourth point...but I liked all that you said... like very, very much!
cjmoo_ #5
Chapter 25: Woohoo! Thank you for writing this for Mamamoo's 4th anniversary~ I like the fact that this chapter is about them reminiscing the most memorable past.

Oo wow, I wouldn't have known that Wheein's memory was an actual one if you hadn't mentioned it at the end. (A fail fan here: I haven't finished watching Secret Unnie >.<) Knowing that it's really what Wheein went though, it makes this story more melancholic. She's been through so much these past 4 years (and more). That shade though ahaha: 'This group was her dream group, there was no other group that she could every try being in apart from this one- albeit a better name could've been chosen, but she takes what she can get.' I like how amidst the worries and concerns she had after their debut performances, she still looked at the positive side which kept her going.

I really like how Hwasa's memories is basically of Wheein, but it's inevitable since they spent almost all their lives together. Hwasa's memory is too cute. (Have you watched the Life Bar episode where Wheesa appeared on it? They did say that they probably know each other more than their parents do!) It's nice that Hwasa appreciates the contrasting personalities she and Wheein have. It definitely made their friendship more meaningful.

Byul's memory is just so full of insecurities that it hurts reading it. Another shade there ahaha: 'Yes, for the first time, she was in her own house.' - I choked a little! I love the way you ended Byul's memory with this line: 'They had made a moment she would have wanted to forget, into a moment she knew she had to remember for the rest of her life, and she didn't know how to repay them.' I'm so glad that her members didn't leave her alone to her thoughts and insecurities.

Of course Solar's memory would be linked to her role as the leader. I think in general, throughout all of their memories, no matter how different they are, it all comes back to the main point on how the four of them stuck through everything together. They became each other's supports whether or not they know it. They stepped up to the occasion when they're needed to do so, and seeing how the four of them recognised this fact makes my heart feel warm.

Just two comments on your writing: I felt that the ending was rather abrupt, seeing how there's an introduction paragraph but not an ending one. Also, most of the paragraphs are rather lengthy. The paragraphs could be split to become shorter ones so that it's easier to be read.

Thank you very much for writing this! :)
Pringletip
#6
Chapter 9: What the. Noooooo Yongsun-ahhhhh
Pringletip
#7
Chapter 3: This is cute <3
cjmoo_ #8
Chapter 24: Comments for Teasing: Ugh Byul's such a loser ahahahah but aww I like how heartwarming this story is at the end. That last paragraph is everything! Interesting that we get to see the different reactions of the members. For some reason through their reaction I could feel their love for Byul too, expressed in their own ways. :') I get the feeling Byul is certain of her members' love for her, and so she was comfortable teasing them. :') (Also, I can almost hear Yongsun's "ISANGHAE!" haha!)
Comments for The Sun: I am such a er for imagery and I think you've beautifully brought out the actual sun/Yongsun imagery through Byul's POV. I really like how when the sun is not visible being covered by rain clouds, another sun appears to bring light to Byul's life. Seems like this story isn't complete though! I guess we'll never know what happens between Byul and Yongsun. Interesting how I could hear Byul's turmoil.
Thank you for this update! :)
cjmoo_ #9
Chapter 23: Welcome back! I enjoyed reading both stories.
In Lucky, I really liked seeing how greasy Byul can be at one point, and the next moment she becomes very sincere.
Azegag is too cute and funny xD
cjmoo_ #10
Chapter 23: Nooo :'(
I like how you wrote Byulyi's answer as one whole chunk and making it sound forced. Seemed like she has been feeling that way for a long time :/
Hope the rest supports Hyejin as well, especially if she continues having that image of Byul in her head :/