Masquarade Ball (part 1)

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“Um… What are we doing here unnie?” Moonbyul asked apprehensively, staring at the streams of mask wearing people entering a huge mansion. Ignoring her best friend, Solar pulled up at the driveway, and threw something blue at Moonbyul before stepping out of the car and muttering, “Man, and you call me a pretty idiot. A ballgown and a suit, most people would have guessed it by now” under her breath. “Yongddonieeeeeeeee! Weren’t we supposed to go for my birthday dinner? What are we doing here?” Moonbyul whined, a pout appearing on her face as she stepped out of the car. She looked down at blue object in her hands and realised that it was a mask, in fact, it was similar to the one Yongsun had just put on, just not that sparkly and that Yongsun’s was pink. Like really bright, eye-blinding pink. Moonbyul could not stand it, and looked instead, at her own. It was a pretty sky blue colour, with hints of white which made it look like a nice day with clouds in the sky and not too sparkly, which Moonbyul actually liked. Moonbyul hesitantly put on the mask, and walked towards Yongsun, stumbling a little due the the unfamiliarity of the mask. She soon got used to it and walked quickly to her best friend, avoiding the huge masses of people. Ignoring the giggles from Yongsun, she repeated her question for the third time tonight. Her friend turned to her sighing before saying, “Byul-ah, you are in a suit. I am in a dress. We both have masks. Everyone here are wearing what we are. So what are we doing here? And if you are really that dumb, then think back to last Friday,” while counting off each reason. Still not being able to link everything, Moonbyul traced her memory back to Friday. Her face showed disgust upon realising where they were. “Don’t tell me… it’s the masquerade ball isn’t it?” Her friend’s face lit up, and her head bounced up and down repeatedly showing that what she said was right. You see, the town that the two friends live in hold an annual ball, each year with a different theme, of which last year was Winter Ball and this year was a Masquerade Ball. It fell on Moonbyul’s birthday, December 22, and she never went for it, being the anti-social and shy girl that she was. She had a little anxiety disorder, only able to freeze when she was around more than 3 people that she did not know at the same time. It was also never a problem. Her family never forced her to go, respecting her decisions, but that all changed after Yongsun came into her life. 

Yongsun was her senior by 1 year technically, but Moonbyul skipped a grade, after acing the math paper of the senior students when she was just a sophomore. That was how she first met Yongsun. Yongsun made a grand arrival on the 3rd day of school, as she ‘fell sick’  on the first 2 days. She was paired up with Moonbyul, the teacher hoping that at least a little intelligence and self-control would rub off on the girl. Thankfully, it seemed to have worked, though it took quite some time, seeing how shy Moonbyul was. Soon they were studying together and Yongsun’s grades improved and she had a clean attendance record for the first time in years. They were best buddies ever since. 

The Ball was a huge tradition, and everyone in town on that day was invited to go regardless of status, income, age or gender. There was the occasional Cinderella story but everything was usually okay. Once Yongsun entered her life, she had always begged to go with Moonbyul but usually just either went with her other friends, alone or just stayed at home with Byul, mostly just her sulking. This year, Moonbyul thought that Yongsun had finally given up on convincing her to go to the ball, as apart from the mention of it on Friday, not a peep was made about it. But nope. Secretly, Yongsun had gotten permission from Byul’s parents to take her to the ball. They had always wanted Byul to go have fun at the Ball on her birthday instead of just studying at home or something but they respected her decision. So when Yongsun offered to take Byul to the Ball, they jumped on it right away. They made a very elaborate plan, even making up to 3 to 4 backup plans in case they got caught, but Moonbyul being the clueless yet oddly genius kid that she was suspected nothing and that let them only use the original plan. 

After having a small celebration at home during breakfast, they managed to make Moonbyul believe that they were going to her favourite (and expensive) restaurant for dinner, so they had succeeded in getting Moonbyul into at least a suit, seeing that she would not wear a dress. Her parents BARELY managed to escape, lying really badly about something along the lines of a company emergency that cropped up, and the two (Yongsun and Moonbyul) could only go on their own, even though it was on the day of the ball, which was a public holiday to allow for everyone to attend. 

That led them to where they were now, with Yongsun and Moonbyul standing outside the door, Moonbyul hesitating while Yongsun was rushing her to go in quickly. “You might even find the girl of your dreams here! Hurry before she falls for someone!” Was the statement which led to her feet finally crossing the doorframe. Stepping into the mansion, Moonbyul just realised how big it was on the inside. It was already plenty big on the outside but looked even bigger on the inside. She was pulled down the hallway by an eager Yongsun, her legs dragging behind her because of her reluctance to attend this ball. Upon reaching the ballroom, Yongsun instantly pulled away from her and headed to the food

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Hey! I know I haven’t updated this in a long time but I’ve recently started a full update! Not a ADITL but a whole one couple centric One-shot! (Pst it’s not Moonsun)

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Honeyoong93
#1
Chapter 3: Ahhh wheesa mereka emang precious :*
ThatOneBi
#2
Chapter 1: Omo~
yongwhee
#3
Chapter 26: This is so cuuuuuuute im meltinggggg
Cdival #4
Chapter 10: Chapter 10: I know I'm reading this waaaaay after you posted it, but I just wanted to say that I really liked what you talked about..I mean, your note!...all of it, but specially the fourth point...but I liked all that you said... like very, very much!
cjmoo_ #5
Chapter 25: Woohoo! Thank you for writing this for Mamamoo's 4th anniversary~ I like the fact that this chapter is about them reminiscing the most memorable past.

Oo wow, I wouldn't have known that Wheein's memory was an actual one if you hadn't mentioned it at the end. (A fail fan here: I haven't finished watching Secret Unnie >.<) Knowing that it's really what Wheein went though, it makes this story more melancholic. She's been through so much these past 4 years (and more). That shade though ahaha: 'This group was her dream group, there was no other group that she could every try being in apart from this one- albeit a better name could've been chosen, but she takes what she can get.' I like how amidst the worries and concerns she had after their debut performances, she still looked at the positive side which kept her going.

I really like how Hwasa's memories is basically of Wheein, but it's inevitable since they spent almost all their lives together. Hwasa's memory is too cute. (Have you watched the Life Bar episode where Wheesa appeared on it? They did say that they probably know each other more than their parents do!) It's nice that Hwasa appreciates the contrasting personalities she and Wheein have. It definitely made their friendship more meaningful.

Byul's memory is just so full of insecurities that it hurts reading it. Another shade there ahaha: 'Yes, for the first time, she was in her own house.' - I choked a little! I love the way you ended Byul's memory with this line: 'They had made a moment she would have wanted to forget, into a moment she knew she had to remember for the rest of her life, and she didn't know how to repay them.' I'm so glad that her members didn't leave her alone to her thoughts and insecurities.

Of course Solar's memory would be linked to her role as the leader. I think in general, throughout all of their memories, no matter how different they are, it all comes back to the main point on how the four of them stuck through everything together. They became each other's supports whether or not they know it. They stepped up to the occasion when they're needed to do so, and seeing how the four of them recognised this fact makes my heart feel warm.

Just two comments on your writing: I felt that the ending was rather abrupt, seeing how there's an introduction paragraph but not an ending one. Also, most of the paragraphs are rather lengthy. The paragraphs could be split to become shorter ones so that it's easier to be read.

Thank you very much for writing this! :)
Pringletip
#6
Chapter 9: What the. Noooooo Yongsun-ahhhhh
Pringletip
#7
Chapter 3: This is cute <3
cjmoo_ #8
Chapter 24: Comments for Teasing: Ugh Byul's such a loser ahahahah but aww I like how heartwarming this story is at the end. That last paragraph is everything! Interesting that we get to see the different reactions of the members. For some reason through their reaction I could feel their love for Byul too, expressed in their own ways. :') I get the feeling Byul is certain of her members' love for her, and so she was comfortable teasing them. :') (Also, I can almost hear Yongsun's "ISANGHAE!" haha!)
Comments for The Sun: I am such a er for imagery and I think you've beautifully brought out the actual sun/Yongsun imagery through Byul's POV. I really like how when the sun is not visible being covered by rain clouds, another sun appears to bring light to Byul's life. Seems like this story isn't complete though! I guess we'll never know what happens between Byul and Yongsun. Interesting how I could hear Byul's turmoil.
Thank you for this update! :)
cjmoo_ #9
Chapter 23: Welcome back! I enjoyed reading both stories.
In Lucky, I really liked seeing how greasy Byul can be at one point, and the next moment she becomes very sincere.
Azegag is too cute and funny xD
cjmoo_ #10
Chapter 23: Nooo :'(
I like how you wrote Byulyi's answer as one whole chunk and making it sound forced. Seemed like she has been feeling that way for a long time :/
Hope the rest supports Hyejin as well, especially if she continues having that image of Byul in her head :/