When She Left

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"Yah KIM YONGSUN! YOU LEFT FOR SEOUL 6 YEARS AGO AND WE HARDLY KEPT IN CONTACT SINCE THEN BUT YOU SUDDENLY MESSAGE ME AND SAY THAT YOU WOULD BE GOING TO AMERICA TO PURSUE YOUR DREAMS FOR 8 YEARS?! DOES THAT MAKE SENSE? HOW COULD YOU?! I THOUGHT YOU CONSIDERED ME AS A FRIEND?!" The taller girl spat pathetically at the shorter one, each standing at opposite sides of the wall. The taller girl cringed inwardly at the word 'friend', knowing that she thought of the other as more than just a friend. "NOT ONLY THAT! I DID NOT FIND OUT ABOUT YOUR BOYFRIEND THROUGH YOU BUT THROUGH WHEEIN AND HWASA? What happened to us..?" She ended off quietly. They were standing at gate 22 at Incheon Airport. Solar was standing inside the gate with her boyfriend, who did not look happy at the sudden intrusion, already, staring at her previous best friend through a thin piece of glass. She knew that what she did was wrong, that everything she did was wrong, but... She knew that she had to do it that way. She was the one who told her parents to transfer her to a middle school in Seoul, away from Byulyi, away from the forbidden feelings she had for the other girl. She got a boyfriend to try to suppress those feelings but they only got stronger as every small and sweet gesture just led her back to think of how it would have been like if Byulyi, or Moonbyul in this case, did it to her. Only Wheein knew of the real reason of why she left, instead of the "I need to further my studies, and this is not where I can do that." reason she gave the rest. The friendship that the four childhood friends, Solar, Moonbyul, Wheein and Hwasa had was broken since then. The younger three still stuck together but Solar slowly drifted away and all contact was soon lost until they received that message from the oldest girl. They immediately rushed to the airport where each of them barely managed to meet her to say their goodbyes.

It was only after Wheein and Hwasa rushed back for class after one last hug and Solar went through the gate, that Moonbyul's heart shattered, finally realisimg that that the goodbye would mean that they might not see each other again so she did what she could. Confess right there and then. "KIM YONGSUN! YOU REALLY LIVE UP TO YOUR NAME HUH? YOU PRETTY FOOL! HOW COULD YOU NOT NOTICE MY CRUSH FOR YOU! FOR 12 FREAKING YEARS?! IT WAS SO OBVIOUS!" Right as she finished, she felt a fist connecting with her face and someone yelling out her name before the world turned black.

 5 hours later...
"Uh... My head! Where am I?" Moonbyul said asshe tried to open her eyes and she was temporarily blinded by the brightness of the room. She saw the silhouette of a head blocking her view. "Byul-ah? BYUL-AH! DOCTOR! SHE IS AWAKE!" She heard a very familiar voice call out. The loud noise caused her head to hurt as if her head might crack. was so dry, as if she had not drunk anything for the past year. "Yo..yongsun unnie?" Her voice cracked as she spoke. "Yes it's me! It's okay! Everything is ok! I'm here, right beside you!" Her unnie comforted her. "Wha...what happened?" The younger girl asked, still confused about everything and wincing due to the bright lights she sees through her semi-opened eyes. "Emmmmmm about that... I will tell you after you recover ok? Don't worry and just rest first!" The older girl said hesitantly, as if covering up som

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Honeyoong93 #1
Chapter 3: Ahhh wheesa mereka emang precious :*
ThatOneBi #2
Chapter 1: Omo~
yongwhee #3
Chapter 26: This is so cuuuuuuute im meltinggggg
Cdival #4
Chapter 10: Chapter 10: I know I'm reading this waaaaay after you posted it, but I just wanted to say that I really liked what you talked about..I mean, your note!...all of it, but specially the fourth point...but I liked all that you said... like very, very much!
cjmoo_ #5
Chapter 25: Woohoo! Thank you for writing this for Mamamoo's 4th anniversary~ I like the fact that this chapter is about them reminiscing the most memorable past.

Oo wow, I wouldn't have known that Wheein's memory was an actual one if you hadn't mentioned it at the end. (A fail fan here: I haven't finished watching Secret Unnie >.<) Knowing that it's really what Wheein went though, it makes this story more melancholic. She's been through so much these past 4 years (and more). That shade though ahaha: 'This group was her dream group, there was no other group that she could every try being in apart from this one- albeit a better name could've been chosen, but she takes what she can get.' I like how amidst the worries and concerns she had after their debut performances, she still looked at the positive side which kept her going.

I really like how Hwasa's memories is basically of Wheein, but it's inevitable since they spent almost all their lives together. Hwasa's memory is too cute. (Have you watched the Life Bar episode where Wheesa appeared on it? They did say that they probably know each other more than their parents do!) It's nice that Hwasa appreciates the contrasting personalities she and Wheein have. It definitely made their friendship more meaningful.

Byul's memory is just so full of insecurities that it hurts reading it. Another shade there ahaha: 'Yes, for the first time, she was in her own house.' - I choked a little! I love the way you ended Byul's memory with this line: 'They had made a moment she would have wanted to forget, into a moment she knew she had to remember for the rest of her life, and she didn't know how to repay them.' I'm so glad that her members didn't leave her alone to her thoughts and insecurities.

Of course Solar's memory would be linked to her role as the leader. I think in general, throughout all of their memories, no matter how different they are, it all comes back to the main point on how the four of them stuck through everything together. They became each other's supports whether or not they know it. They stepped up to the occasion when they're needed to do so, and seeing how the four of them recognised this fact makes my heart feel warm.

Just two comments on your writing: I felt that the ending was rather abrupt, seeing how there's an introduction paragraph but not an ending one. Also, most of the paragraphs are rather lengthy. The paragraphs could be split to become shorter ones so that it's easier to be read.

Thank you very much for writing this! :)
Pringletip #6
Chapter 9: What the. Noooooo Yongsun-ahhhhh
Pringletip #7
Chapter 3: This is cute <3
cjmoo_ #8
Chapter 24: Comments for Teasing: Ugh Byul's such a loser ahahahah but aww I like how heartwarming this story is at the end. That last paragraph is everything! Interesting that we get to see the different reactions of the members. For some reason through their reaction I could feel their love for Byul too, expressed in their own ways. :') I get the feeling Byul is certain of her members' love for her, and so she was comfortable teasing them. :') (Also, I can almost hear Yongsun's "ISANGHAE!" haha!)
Comments for The Sun: I am such a er for imagery and I think you've beautifully brought out the actual sun/Yongsun imagery through Byul's POV. I really like how when the sun is not visible being covered by rain clouds, another sun appears to bring light to Byul's life. Seems like this story isn't complete though! I guess we'll never know what happens between Byul and Yongsun. Interesting how I could hear Byul's turmoil.
Thank you for this update! :)
cjmoo_ #9
Chapter 23: Welcome back! I enjoyed reading both stories.
In Lucky, I really liked seeing how greasy Byul can be at one point, and the next moment she becomes very sincere.
Azegag is too cute and funny xD
cjmoo_ #10
Chapter 23: Nooo :'(
I like how you wrote Byulyi's answer as one whole chunk and making it sound forced. Seemed like she has been feeling that way for a long time :/
Hope the rest supports Hyejin as well, especially if she continues having that image of Byul in her head :/
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