✖「 Teaser 」

✖「 Young Avengers 」 New Heroes Emerge

TEASER

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"Fair is foul and foul is fair." Macbeth (ACT ONE, SCENE ONE)

There’s a certain twinkle in her eye as she watches the mystic walk around the huge pool that bubbles and then simmers down before it smooths itself out. More like mirth dances in the female’s eye as she practically dances around the small pool of water. She can’t stop the smile that makes the end of curl up in delight. Her eye casts over the calm water of the mystic’s pool. There were several heroes seated around a spacious living room with different aged kids around them. Smiling, laughing, one would call it happiness, that settled around them and was rich and vibrant in the atmosphere. Something the girl or the people behind her hadn’t experienced all that much. Which is what made her smile broader, exposing the girl’s pearly whites. Although, some would say, the teeth protruding out looked more like canines then normal human teeth. 

Turning around swiftly, the girl’s smile still plastered on her face as she threw her hands up, looking at the other people in the room.  

    “Brothers and sisters, it is time for us to plan our revenge on The Avengers.” The small group around her cheered. Giving her the reassurance she needed to go along with this plan. She along with the others would crush the Avengers and their children, once and for all. They would get revenge on them and make them suffer as they had made them and their parents suffer. 

author's note

 

Okay so I know this is kind of like … what!? But, this is a small teaser that was really inspired by kaleidoscopeheartz’s applyfic ‘Underdogs’ teaser. I read that and I got really inspired to write a teaser about … someone who will really be part of the story’s plot and a thorn in the Young Avengers side. Well ‘they’ will be a thorn in Young Avengers side, because more little teasers will come like this as I am waiting for apps. I don’t have a clue if this group will be the children of the villains or if they will be an independent group. 

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muse007
#1
Chapter 15: Yeah, I'm happy that you dropped this, especially with what's being released for the slate for Marvel. I'm so excited about future MCU films. I just caught up on reading both chapters and I really like them. The way you describe and wrote about the hallucinations in Chapter Three was soo good. You really put Katarina through the wringer and all I could think about was Katarina get behind me! XD I love the group dynamic between Sigyn, Katarina, and Hugh I thought that part was so good.

I really loved that Jackie got to go out and enjoy some time with her friends. There is another Young Avenger in the club, haha that was awesome to see that he is in a band. I thought it was really cool to see the difference in the way she thinks when there is danger. It makes it interesting how she thinks in the future when there is a threat again especially involving the team. I loved the way you described how Nikolai uses his power and how as Jackie was about to act, he had already done it. The scene with Doutzen and her siblings watching the movie was so cute. OMG, the group chat was hilarious and I can not wait when more members to join it. I thought it was cool that there was a sort of kinship with the other heroes' children over their parents. Jackie and Doutzen being badass was so cool. I can't wait to see more of them in the group and as a duo because I think they would work well together. Haha. I liked that we see the same monsters show up but this time they are real and I can not wait to know more about them and who in the world is summoning them. Like these creatures seem like they would be trouble. Plus the way you describe was cool. The ending conversation was great and I liked that Doutzen and Jackie had a conversation about the meeting and we got to see how they thought about why they should join.

I really enjoyed learning about characters in these chapters. I like that we know that Katarina didn't have a good childhood or that we know sometimes Jackie's heightened sense can bother her. I like that Doutzen had a movie night with her siblings and that she also keeps her now under the couch, haha. Nice job! I know there has been so much information with these tv shows and movies but I'm glad you are keeping some of the details from them but also not.
Golden-Blood
#2
Chapter 15: Awh was so glad to see Jackie! You really did do her justice too. I'm super excited to see how the story is going to evolve and how all the other characters are going to interact with one another! SUPER HAPPY I caught this update on time too! I am pumped, what a good way to start my friday!
GhostingA
#3
Chapter 14: clones? VARIANTS? variants? VARients??? O.O
upticks of nightmares of the past cropping up? more hero offspirngs? ooooooooo
and I'm SO UP FOR IT! Bring it on author! EEeeeeeee, this is so excitinggg
friendlybknws
#4
Chapter 14: hello! haven't been active on the site as of late, but i must say, these chapters you've written have been awesome so far! particularly chapter three, with how you wrote katarina's little hallucinatory episode in the lobby. it's nice to see all three introduced characters interact so casually! and sigyn and hugh almost getting into a fight in the lab lol. their daily lives being featured in these chapters are quite interesting as well.

also, variants / clones??? I'm excited about the direction this will go! thank you so much for continuing this and making this work.
exopanda
#5
Chapter 14: LOVE THE CHAPTER! I kid you not I was so engrossed is Katrina and the illusion that i still thought she was seeing stuff even with Sigyn and Hugh. Also muLTIVERSE?? Yes pls! There's a lot to be done with it. And welcome back!
MinRin04 #6
Chapter 14: OMG the chapter is perfect !!!
I love how you wrote Katarina ! You really got her personality down :)
I really love how you wrote the illusion, it felt really real and for a second I forgot it was an illusion.
I think my favorite part was the interaction between Hugh, Sigyn and Kat ! I love how Kat is like the 'responsible' one here and tries to avoid chaos in her lab :p
Overall I really love the chapter!
Thank you for choosing Katarina <3
Soonyangel
#7
Chapter 14: Glad you're back and happy new year ! I wish you all the best for this upcoming year :)
So, Katarina is definitely an interesting character. The entire beginning was reaaaaaally interesting, I just love how you developed her hallucination/illusion. The description of the situation was really cool!
The team is slowly coming together ! I adore the bickering between Sigyn and Hugh, that's my girl ! And yes, she'd definitely be waiting for him to take the bait haha. Poor Katarina has a lot to deal with :p
Also, the whole variant thing is cool ! Loki brought a whole new perspective on this, so it's really cool to see that it will play a part in this story. Could be nice to see the differences between the timelines! I'm looking forward to more !
Golden-Blood
#8
Chapter 14: Love this! I'm glad you're back! I'm definitely looking forward to where the story is going to go especially with all the new developments in the mcu!
missxox
#9
Chapter 14: I logged in right on time! So basically the other characters are variants. I’m glad you’re back writing
GhostingA
#10
Chapter 13: omg decided to check back into asianfanfics in .... some time ...
and i come back this being updated?! omggg christmas has come early *o*
love the chapters!! i am definitely looking forward to more =D