chapter 18

Darkness Is Light's Shadow
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"I don't think you as my friend so you don't have to too."she siged and may be gave up too.
"As a teacher I want to know your problem." What's wrong with her?
"Oh yes it's your business because of me you have to pass so many times with me which you probably don't want."
"Thats not what I mean you know that.Ok you don't have to say anything.you make me feel like I am interfering others personal thing,which kind of girl I am definately not,I just want to say don't ruin your life,you are a good boy."she is becoming nice now.
"I am sorry."I said looking into her eyes.
"it's ok.I am not mad for this smallest thing."she said smiled and concentrate in the book.
"I am sorry for ruining your date with kwangmin." She looked at me shocked,
"Oh no no no.We are not dating.I just help him in something and he wanted to treat me.it's just like that."
"Then sorry because of me you had to hear so many things." "I am taking this as a apology because...that time I was really hurt when he said those.I am sorry too because you had to heard awful things too for me.He is really crazy,without knowing anything he just love to irritate people"
She said and sighed.After that we didn't share any talk just did our works.


After finishing I went to meet my buddies, it's an old wooden house where we all meet together, I went there and shock to see the guys with bandages and so many bruises.
"Hey what happen to you guys?"I asked all of them.
"Was that new student were a assassin or something?"I asked them again. Key hyung looked at me and said
"I am sure that student can't even hold a fagot."
"Then why this happen to you guys?"
Onew hyung than said,
"Police came."
"Police beated you up like that."I asked confused because if police ca

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Inspiration77
#1
Chapter 28: did u like... update?? 0.o WAHHHH
09imyoona
#2
Chapter 25: I feel bad for bora, she is so confused
Inspiration77
#3
Chapter 23: This- has so been my favourite chapter so far! Like I love Bora and Sunggyu’s chemistry. You have portrayed their character really well! Like really, hats off, and a standing ovation with seal clapping! Love this story!
yutoppang
#4
Chapter 3: I've only started to read this today and I hope you don't mind me (possibly) commenting on each chapter from now on ^^
I hope you don't take this to heart and, rather, take my comments as a way to improve your writing~
So far, the characters are well thought out: I like how there are different personalities to the KPop idols you've chosen, as well as your OC (the mute girl).
Although, it's only my personal nit-grit, but I would rather read from only one person's point of view per chapter, or maybe a third person perspective. However, that's only my opinion and this is still your story, so you can absolutely do whatever you like!
Another thing is grammar. Your grammar is really good so far, but it seems like you change from present tense to past tense, then vice versa? Being consistent in tense would be a good start~
Lastly, I have on question for this particular chapter: chapter 3. Doesn't Bora know Jimin from meeting him in the teachers' office? Because why does she not know him when they changed classrooms? o.o