Darkness Is Light's Shadow

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This bright obsession called love, has always had a sinister shadow called darkness.

Foreword

Okay, so I am kinda scared. This is my first fanfiction being published and my sisters say that I am good but truthfully it is hodge-podge. I still am giving it a try.  Hope you guys will enjoy and waste few moments of your precious lives, reading my small updates. ( you are lucky they won't be big) 

WARNING! My keyboard has major brain problems so there will be quite, I mean A LOT of spelling mistakes such as "soldiers" for "shoulders". Please be considerate and considerate and considerate again. I apologise in advance and I will not be very regular in terms of updating since I am lazy. Infinite fighting! 

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Inspiration77 #1
Chapter 28: did u like... update?? 0.o WAHHHH
09imyoona #2
Chapter 25: I feel bad for bora, she is so confused
Inspiration77 #3
Chapter 23: This- has so been my favourite chapter so far! Like I love Bora and Sunggyu’s chemistry. You have portrayed their character really well! Like really, hats off, and a standing ovation with seal clapping! Love this story!
yutoppang #4
Chapter 3: I've only started to read this today and I hope you don't mind me (possibly) commenting on each chapter from now on ^^
I hope you don't take this to heart and, rather, take my comments as a way to improve your writing~
So far, the characters are well thought out: I like how there are different personalities to the KPop idols you've chosen, as well as your OC (the mute girl).
Although, it's only my personal nit-grit, but I would rather read from only one person's point of view per chapter, or maybe a third person perspective. However, that's only my opinion and this is still your story, so you can absolutely do whatever you like!
Another thing is grammar. Your grammar is really good so far, but it seems like you change from present tense to past tense, then vice versa? Being consistent in tense would be a good start~
Lastly, I have on question for this particular chapter: chapter 3. Doesn't Bora know Jimin from meeting him in the teachers' office? Because why does she not know him when they changed classrooms? o.o
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