chapter 19

Darkness Is Light's Shadow
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Dongwoo pov,
"What happen to you hyung?You are not like this."Woohyun said annoyed.We are sitting in a cafe.
"What you want me to do now?if you don't believe then ask sungyeol I am really busy.And yeolie isn't even doing well."I murmured the last sentence.


"This is not what I am talking about.You can at least message her how she is doing right?she is always waiting for you.She even notice when I call you,you receive but you don't receive her's.Don't you think you are being too much?"I sighed.and took a sip of my coffee.
"I am sorry."I said and he looked serious this time.
"Hyung."
"Hm?"
"Do you really like her?"
"Why are you asking me suddenly?"I said with a laugh.then I said again.
"Well when she asked me out I said I like her too and of course I still like her,We are dating now as you know but I have never said I love her." I said with logic.
"Hyung this is how you are really hurting her.if you knew that you won't fall for her then why did you accept? You should have just rejected like hoya."
"Look at my age I should have a girlfriend now right?"
"Gyu hyung have no girlfriend too"
"He made one today don't you know?"he sighed and said,
"But you guys shouldn't hurt other's feelings."
"Did you forget why we are here!"I raised my voice a bit this time."we can't fall for anyone here you know that perfectly more than me. it was obvious that I can't fall for her even if I want to"still scolding my dongsaeng.
"But it's really. ...."he couldn't finish his sentence and I know he can't. We finished our coffee in silence. On the cafe t.v. woohyun was singing on a stage.
"oh woohyun ah,you improved a lot."
"Thanks to your girlfriend hehe. Well how long you

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Inspiration77
#1
Chapter 28: did u like... update?? 0.o WAHHHH
09imyoona
#2
Chapter 25: I feel bad for bora, she is so confused
Inspiration77
#3
Chapter 23: This- has so been my favourite chapter so far! Like I love Bora and Sunggyu’s chemistry. You have portrayed their character really well! Like really, hats off, and a standing ovation with seal clapping! Love this story!
yutoppang
#4
Chapter 3: I've only started to read this today and I hope you don't mind me (possibly) commenting on each chapter from now on ^^
I hope you don't take this to heart and, rather, take my comments as a way to improve your writing~
So far, the characters are well thought out: I like how there are different personalities to the KPop idols you've chosen, as well as your OC (the mute girl).
Although, it's only my personal nit-grit, but I would rather read from only one person's point of view per chapter, or maybe a third person perspective. However, that's only my opinion and this is still your story, so you can absolutely do whatever you like!
Another thing is grammar. Your grammar is really good so far, but it seems like you change from present tense to past tense, then vice versa? Being consistent in tense would be a good start~
Lastly, I have on question for this particular chapter: chapter 3. Doesn't Bora know Jimin from meeting him in the teachers' office? Because why does she not know him when they changed classrooms? o.o