Mandu in the Trap

Description

You lure a mouse into a trap with cheese, but you lure a Sunggyu into a trap with mandu.

(a.k.a. How Kim Sunggyu and Nam Woohyun completely misjudged each other)

Foreword

This is based on the drama "Cheese in the Trap" and not the webtoon version. So I'm mostly making fun of the drama. Because I didn't like the drama so much, I'm re-writing it. Knowledge of the webtoon or drama may or may not be required. Haha I'm not too sure.

Back to Top ↑

Comments

You must be logged in to comment
Simran20 #1
Chapter 10: Mandu😍😍😍😍
Zd7394 #2
Chapter 9: In the first it really similar to the cheese in trap
But it get different in every next chapters
Zd7394 #3
Chapter 9: 😂it was fun when they were in the hospital and said like each other
Zd7394 #4
Chapter 9: It's hard to write a lot mandu
😂😂
Zd7394 #5
Chapter 5: Finally they get start to know each other
emholic #6
Kodus for this wonderful fic authornim!!! =)~♡
Myskworld #7
I had to re read all the fic because it has been such a long time XD

Firstly, I have to tell you that your writing style is amazing with all this little details in the story. I could feel that you are an english speaker because of the varied vocabulary you used, and I must admit that it have been sometimes confusing for me and my little level in english haha (I think it was easier than TGB so I might have improved my skills... ^^). It really made the story more literary than a basic fanfiction and I really liked that.

About the story, I loved the way Sunggyu and Woohyun's relationship took a very very long time to develop. It may be frustrating but Sunggyu can't overpass his first "bad" impression of Woohyun in a day and this progressive developpement is very well written. I LOVED the suspens in the fic. All that story with the mysterious killer was awesome and the outcome completely up to what I had expected. (The moment when Woohyun came to help Sunggyu is my favorite part of the story if I had to choose one XD).

Thank you very much for this fiction ! It definitely is one of my favorite ever ! :D
lucky_melody #8
Chapter 10: You know? I don't like to wait for each chpater to be uploaded every time I am reading a fic in proccess so I tend to suscribe, let them finish and THEN read it... that's what I did with this... AND HOLY !!!!!!!
You made me cry because I could relate with some feelings from both Nam and Gyu (but more from Nam) and you made me smile, I UNDERSTOOD EACH FREAKING WOOGYU REFERENCE and could not help but smile widely. I should have writen one comment for each chapter BUT I swear I could not interrumpt my reading, yeah your story IS that awesome.
I even spent 6:30 hours reading carefully till 1am even when I had to wake up early for school...
You know what killed me? The part when Gyu and Nam meet each other again when Gyu came back from America, if this how their meeting looked like (in my mind) I cannot picture how would it be when Gyu comes back from the army and Nam has to enter his ToT
I'm so happy... the ending was... LOVE YOU! They understood each other so well and were mature enough to keep trying to improve their relationship, the last lines where they hold each other gaze and BOOM! This is an art piece... thank you TuT <3
yonggyu #9
Chapter 10: auwww my heart! its full with rainbows and unicorns! i really really love this!i love everything from the star till the end.

i felt like watching a drama and i can picture all of them hanging out and woogyu being sweet towards each other.

thank you so much for writing this!
Back to Top ↑