[JongKey Oneshot] The Past

Description

I wrote this one in the middle of the night, but just rewrote the ending~ :D

I know, it's not the best, but please comment on, what you think, and what I should improve on~ :D

I'm thinking of writing a sequel, but I don't want to, if everyone hates it XD

Foreword

Everyone has a past. That’s it. There’s no more to it, since you can’t erase it.

Each person have something in their past, they don’t want to share. Memories, which are never meant to see the sunlight ever again.

At least this was what Key had always believed, until he met him.

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8symmetrical8 #1 Dec 23, 2011 20:44:06

That was so cute :3 Such a strong metaphor throughout :) But it kind of made me sad... But then happy :D Jonghyun is so perfect for Key, and Key is perfect for Jonghyun <3 Nothing will ever change that.

xJungSquaredx #2 Dec 7, 2011 22:13:51

Aw~ So sweet~ ><

Silkekim #3 Dec 5, 2011 07:49:03

wow, Mapi, this story is actually really good! I didn't know you could write such good fanfics ö<br />
I really want to go through this story's gramma and misspellings, but, I wont, because... that doesn't really matter, does it? (though if you ever think it will, just let me know, I would love to go through something before you post it ><)<br />
Anyway, on to the important stuff; I really liked your plot! I was so worried about Key all along, hoping he would forget his past and curious about what had happened~ I also love the way you write and I would definitely read a sequel~ ( as long as it has a happy ending ;w; )

hell #4 Dec 5, 2011 06:45:45

i have a experience this my parents knew that i'm gay ... they didn't throw me out of our house but they forbid me to see my boyfriend ...i told it to my boyfriend he just told me that he will wait for me ... please make a sequel .. love it

-iloveyou- #5 Dec 4, 2011 13:30:38

awww man people wats up with the doubting this is obviously awesome and really touching and urs so right tho everyone even the most nices people can have a past that they would never tell another living soul too and man this was juz really nice they way u wrote it was epic so plz do a sequel plzz with jongkey on top lol :)

CupcakeDeni #6 Dec 4, 2011 13:25:19

aww what a cute story <3 <br />
i like it very much

Miji96 #7 Dec 4, 2011 12:57:15

I say SE, you say QUEL! :D<br />
I liked it oppa! 8D <3