Chapter 3: Where's the next year?? :(

Chapter 2: It was nice to see such a change in attitude in Kibum (it would have been a bit worrisome if his sour mood had lasted a whole year lol) and I really liked the lighter atmosphere you set in this chapter; their playful banter has been entertaining to read and I appreciated how cute Jonghyun is in here (when he pouts 'cause Kibum doesn't seem to be interested in him...! Adorable! :3).
There was another thing I wanted to tell you, I know there was, but for the love of it I can't recall what it was ;;
So...I'll cut this here, I guess. This was really nice and it has been a pleasure to read something written for you! I'll be waiting for the next chapter :)

Ps: I'm sorry, I had to split the message. Was it really that long? ò.o Mah.

Chapter 2: Hello!
I'm actually reviewing something on time...aren't you surprised?! I sure am lol
Anyway, here we go with a little comment - I and it's gonna be a bit meagre, I'm afraid, but it's always feedback and that's good, right? *desperately hopes so*
Okay! Let's start with saying that you're both attempting at my sanity because I can picture those freaking hot chocolates right in front of my eyes and them + Jonghyun might be the most disastrous combo ever. I know I already said this and I know that it's silly, but I had to get it off of my chest, because...yeah, it's a perfect scenario and it's doing things to my poor soul.
Going to more interesting topics (I hope), considering you named the first chapter after a year, I should have expected this time gap between the two chapters...but it still surprised me somehow. Maybe because it's a bit weird, to think their brief encounter could develope more, even though a whole year have passed - a year where they could have easily (and maybe more expectedly) forget about each other. It has been a bit irrealistic for them (and jonghyun in particular) to remember their brief meeting with such a vivid preciion, but hey, that's the nice things about fics, right? ; u ;
(just like it's so weird they keep fixing appointments every year, instead of just exchanging numbers lol But once again, that's what fanfictions are for, to let us run a bit with our imagination!^^)

Chapter 1: I really liked that first chapter. The whole fix looks very interesting and promising. I definitely want to read more.

Chapter 1: Hey dear!
I apologize in advance because this comment will be a bit rushed: I'm about to go to bed and I'm not that lucid to give you such a detailed review of this chapter lol
But still I wanted to leave you my opinion on this tonight (especially because tomorrow I'll be out all day long and who knows if I'll have the time).
This story of yours already looks like it's going to be quite nice: the fact that it's a christmas story already makes it earn lots of points; and then Jonghyun and his sunshine smile working in a stand that sells hot chocolate totally conquered my soul, so you go girl! (Actually, that would be like a dream come true for me). Kibum is more like the embodiement of the grinch, at least from this little snippet, but a grinch is always necessary in christmas fics; I'm sure Jonghyun will be able to make him appreciate this holidays a bit more. I also appreciated this weird mix of fanfic-ish cliché (you know...thei improbable first encounter) and a touch of realism (Kibum that feels a bit weirded out by Jonghyun's approach and that doesn't exactly give in) - it was quaint but nice.
In a word, I'll be waiting for the next chapter! (go Miko!**)
I can't wait to read more about this setting ; u ;

nice plot, please keep it up!