A day with you/ make me your Universe

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A day with you [If we ever meet again]

 

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He flashes her a rather bashful smile which totally didn’t make her breathe catch (insert sarcasm).

She found herself wanting to spend the whole day staring into his eyes and listening to his calming timbre voice, not remotely caring if she missed school the whole day.

And as if reading her mind again, he spoke up.

‘I’m not sure if I’ll be able to ride this bus tomorrow, as I’ve being riding it nonstop since last week and I don’t know if I’ll ever take this route again. But most importantly I don’t know if I’ll ever get the chance see you again’. He pauses to stare at his twiddling fingers; a habit she already discovered was a part of him.

Drowning her in his warm gaze, he asks.

 ‘Will you spend the rest of today with me?’ 

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naimiestrella #1
Chapter 1: Wait, they were immortals and after they jumped at the lilac moon they became mortals?
BlackisBlack #2
Chapter 1: Whoa, this is just- amazing! I so get the title now, and the title does have a ring to it. The story was no joke, this is just incredible. I love it! Thank you so much for writing this, author-nim! ^^
BlackisBlack #3
The description has much more depth than my maturity (which I'm not sure I still have XD)
xxPinkPinkPinkxx #4
Chapter 1: So the exodus of the black pearl moonlight (I see what you did there) has something to do with Luhan's, um, thingy. But wait- the translation of the Chinese characters means "Black House". Why is there too much black? XD Sorry for the lame joke XD
Although some parts weren't clear to me (like WTH happened to Luhan), I like this story. God bless your hands for writing this! ♥
xxPinkPinkPinkxx #5
This totally doesn't have any connection but, I love the pink touch on the font! Pink is awesome XD

But are they both vampires or is Sehun human?
mochilicious- #6
Chapter 1: When I read this, I remembered OT12... then I keep hearing the song El Dorado on my mind, which kinda made me sad. But this is just too good! Thank you so much for writing this wonderful story!
mochilicious- #7
The description is just beautifully crafted- I love how I get shivers, this is real OMG. Anyways, I'll be reading this ^^
Uniquestel #8
Chapter 1: I love this, this is just beautiful. Although I don't understand, is this related to the wolf drama version mv. Did Luhan turned human? What happened? Nevertheless of the questions, this story made me cry...
Uniquestel #9
I am in love with your description (for some unknown reason)
This is off-topic, but can you link me the contest? Oh- good luck with your story, I'm sure it'll be a treat to read! ^^
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