reviews (added applicant numbers)

WA$$UP REWRITTEN ❖ APPLY OPEN! 12/25/15
「AUTHOR NOTE」
this is where your application will be reviewed!! here's a legend for it:

ERROR: error means there's something wrong with your application, don't worry, I'll tell you what it is.
ACCEPTED: accepted means that there's nothing wrong with your app and you were accepted and are waiting for chosen results.
CHOSEN: if you're chosen on the spot then that means you did a beyond amazing job, so much that you were able to get in the story without waiting to be accepted // and or you were chosen for the story after the results were posted.
PENDING: pending means you're waiting for results, or your application is pending review. 

APPLICANTS:
- fearless LEADER, MAIN RAPPER : 0
- etheral visuals, sub-vocalist and visual : 01
- golden, triple threat : 01

- charasmatic flow, sub-rapper: 0
 
「_SUGA_KOOKIES_ : CHOI JIN-KYONG」
POSITION: POWERFUL VOCALS - main vocals/lead dancer
LOVE INTEREST: park jimin, bts.
TALENT TWINS: suzy from miss a as fc, hyolyn from sistar as singing twin, ari from waveya as dancing twin.
COMMENTS:  this is my character, jin-kyong ^^ i'll be making her application soon, so look out for that!!
 
「CHOSEN」
「KINSENKA : MOON YEOREUM/SUMMER MINTY」
POSITION: amazing dancing (lead vocalist + main dancer)
LOVE INTEREST: jesus diamond (oc)
TALENT TWINS: krystal of f(x) for fc, talking twin and vocals twin, seungyeon of clc for performance twin
COMMENTS:  the one and only moon yeoreum/summer minty! lol, i should really pay attention to finish my app so I can review y'all 
 
「CHOSEN」
MSDAISYDORK : YANG YOO-JIN」
POSITION: golden - triple threat
LOVE INTEREST: kim namjoon, bts.
TALENT TWINS: wheein from mamamoo as fc, singing twin and dance twin, jiyoon from 4minute as rapping twin and hyoyeon as talking twin
REVIEWER: _sUGA_KOOKIES_
COMMENTS: okay so first off, thank you for being my first ever applicant!!! i appreciate this so much but.....so far, i'm in love with your character!!!! you gave off so much detail for her background and personality but yoo-jin went to jyp? i'm not sure how this makes sense because this is big-hit. if she was a trainee at jyp, please tell me how at all she came to big hit specifically and was accepted there. anyway, another thing i really love is that she isn't at all over powered as the triple threat, because most people would make the triple threat have like a whistle note or something which they should because that's left for either the lead or main vocal, but yoo-jin is absolutely perfect in her vocals, rapping and dancing! i really love it. again, in this section you say she was taken under jyp and sony music but she has to be under big hit, hon. ^^ other than that everything is perfect! honestly, you would have been chosen on the spot had you not had these two big problems >< another thing!!! your love interest is very cute, i love how detailed it is and yoo-jin and namjoon's relationship would be soooo cute in the future. i also love that yoo-jin is a fan of psy, everyone think's he's weird but honestly he's just funny asf so i thought that was unique. you have 3 brownie points btw! your gifs are so nice, your application is detailed and gave us so much information about your lovely character and your character has a very rare fc! mamamoo rocks <3 that's really it, just fix the thing i said and you're good to go!
 
「ACCEPTED」
bii_jisoo : NAM HAEUN」
POSITION: vocalist 1, visual
TALENT TWINS: exid junghwa as vocal twin & TALKING TWIN & RAPPING TWIN, YEOREUM OF HELLOVENUS AS PERFORMANCE TWIN & fc
REVIEWER: KINSENKA
COMMENTS: Hello, josi~ thank you for being my 1st applicant in this story!! Lol. Anyway, let's just get started with the basics — 'a' ok. Enough said, lol (although the nicknames haeun has is quite cute). Thank you for using my gallery as a reference of your face claim!!! ^^ (this is just a side comment, hehe). Anyway, coming to haeun's fashion sense, i cri. Cuz I don't have much pocket money to buy those kind of clothes (i like this one from haeun's fashion, tbh XP.) For personality - it seems quite perfect in both _suga_kookies_ (she read it also) and my view, along with the background 'cause you understand the fact that not everyone in the idol life is really interesting or tragic, etc. Moving on with the relationship section, Everything is okay. TBH, Hayoung reminds me of one of my cousins. I don't really see this as a a flaw but there are not enough links for the talent twins. There's only one link for each except for the talking twin (which I kinda get since you want the authors to imagine how Haeun laughs as well). And also, good for you for not having a love interest (MIne's still wip, but I'm sort of thinking not having a love interest, so high five for you!) Out of curiousity, what's jjamppong? that's the only one question i have for you, lol. I really like the halloween scene request, maybe we'll consider that, hehe. Anyway, thank you for applying!! You've been accepted! Good luck for being chosen ^^
「ACCEPTED」
ACCIONIMBUS2000 : KANG SOHEE」
POSITION: 2nd lead rapper
LOVE INTEREST: jeon jungkook, bts
TALENT TWINS: clc's yeeun as fc and talking twin, wonder girls yubin as rapping twin
REVIEWER: _Suga_kookies_
COMMENTS: alright so first off can i just say how i fell in love completely and utterly with your character. i could not find any flaws at all and i'm honestly so surprised someone actually wanted to put my character as a friend of theirs!! you gave me so much detail for the personality and i loved it, your background wasn't too long or too short and it was straight to the point. your descriptions of your family and friends and even /that soohwa/ which made my day btw-- it was all perfect, and yubin as a rapping twin is perfect because she isn't at all over powered and i love that!!! i can't even deal with how much perfection your application was to me before i even finished reading it?? like ??? also can i say how cute sohee and jungkook are like omfg honestly ships for days. but yes. your application was so good that you've landed yourself a solid place in not just my heart, but my applyfic as well. congratulations on being my first ever not co-author chosen person! <3
that's it cutie, you're in.
「CHOSEN」
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_Suga_Kookies_
1/19/16 - sadly, i will be putting this story in my drafts as no one is applying anymore. if you want to apply to something, i suggest my girls generation one!

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AccioNimbus2000
#1
Chapter 14: Omg the trailer is amazing! I hope more people start applying soon so we can start this awesome story! It's got me so excited :')
monbxbe
#2
Chapter 3: Thank you for the positive review ~
Jjamppong is a spicy seafood ramyun that's popular among Koreans ^^
I will also add more links for the talent twins c:
msdaisydork
#3
Chapter 8: btw nice teaser! it was thrilling ( very ) it excites me ahfakjfnajkhfuenan *got slapped*
msdaisydork
#4
Chapter 3: hi author-nim i have edited my mistake c:
i want to say sorry because when i was doing my app i was out of my mind i thought wa$$up will still be under sony music and mafia records so i put it on the app. i have read the intro thought but then i was really out of my mind and didn't think clearly. sorrrrryyy author-nim *bows* i have replaced "sony music" with "big hit" but if you want me to change it / revise it just tell me and i'll do it c: thank you!!!
monbxbe
#5
Chapter 2: wait for me because i'm applying(as fast as i can without being sloppy otl)
anyways, this story sounds great, i love wassup~ ^^
debbiesiro-official
#6
are we allowed to apply more than once?
AccioNimbus2000
#7
Chapter 5: OMG I LOVE WA$$UP THIS IS PERFECT BRB APPLYING WAIT FOR ME :')
debbiesiro-official
#8
i'm going to apply, wait for me^^
queencivci
#9
Chapter 4: I subscribed to apply, I just need to work on my application :)