Second meeting

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Wooyoung- Why are you so full of yourself that she will fall in love with you hyung? Hyung you are so full of yourself !! Wooyoung exclaimed feeling a little irritated of the boastful attitude of his hyung. Hyung do you like her by any chance? "You seem completely different from your usual self and your usual personality" wooyoung tried to justified the sudden thought of his hyung having chance to like the girl.

Pabo  nickhun smack his head and said Yahh!! why would I suddenly fall in love with someone I just met? Don't be such a pabo

Song POV

Today was a weird day but anyways I feel relaxed after coming home. She took a long shower and then watch tv. Why does everyone wants to be so noisy? "It's better to be alone and I don't want and need anyone in my life" she lost in her thoughts. Suddenly, her phone ring and she check it, it was her mom saying Ji hyo umma and appa wants to meet you. How are you? Please meet us at cafe coffee at 8. After reading it, ji hyo threw her phone off the sofa. The text made her angry and frustated. Why do they want to meet me? Did they finally realized they have a daughter that existed and is alive? saying this, she looked at the clock and got ready to meet her parents.

At the cafe

Mr Song - Jihyo how have you been doing?

Mrs Song - You have become thinner!! What have you been doing? We told you many times to come back home but why are you so adamant? I don't want to listen to your reasons anymore, just come back with us jihyo. Umma is taking you back home, ar

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happyasian #1
Hahahaha i like the cuteness of the story :)
lynn88mr #2
Chapter 4: I feel relieved seeing your improvement.... i could only point out one gramamr mistake at a time so that you will not be confused... use only root word after the word - to, will, would, could, can, shall, should, may and might. It should be " he was going to wake her up", not "he was going to woke her up". Try revise your chapter again... hope this will help... ^^
ahmefrance83 #3
Chapter 4: Thanks for the update Authornim! Please make it loooooooonger next time. It's too short. I wanna read more because your story is very interesting and nice!
Huhitscorn #4
Chapter 4: thanks for the update fighting update soon
Huhitscorn #5
Chapter 3: This is a great story authornim good job pls update
Ferry_Huo32 #6
Chapter 2: This is a great story so pls update soon fighting
stephanie1138 #7
Chapter 2: The story line is okay but try to improve the grammar.Hope you could improve by using 'lynn88mr' advice.
lynn88mr #8
Chapter 2: The story line is good... Gomawo is the correct word for thank you... but it was a bit confusing to differentiate between conversation among characters and your monologue, author-nim. I suggest you read a book or check out good fanfiction on this matter if you feel confused how to use the "". For example, ["Ah, see what you have done to me? I was just trying to greet you!" said Nickhun, feeling pissed. ] or ["Yah, I was right. You do like her, don't you?" asked wooyoung. ]. I hope this will help you a little bit.
shotstill75 #9
Chapter 2: Wah! This is good. Fightingggg!!!!
shuishui #10
Chapter 2: WOOO this story was amazing please write the next chapter