Approaching

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In America

 

A beautiful girl about the age of 18 stormed into her father's study room and said, "Appa, I am going back to Seoul,"

"Mianhae but my decision is final and I can't let you go back," her father replied without giving a second look to her daughter

"Appa I miss him a lot. He is my dongsaeng. Don't you miss him appa? Can't we be together again please?" the girl continuously pleaded her father

"No means no," her father replied in a tone which clearly shows he is getting irritated by it.

"Appa pleaseee," the girl pleaded with tears flowing from her eyes

"My decision is final and your tears will not change anything," her father said in a stern voice

"Why are you doing this appa? Please think about it again appa," the girl continuously pleaded which only resulted in her father storming out of the room leaving her alone in the room.

After wiping the tears from her cheeks, she took out an old photo which has a little boy and girl holding hands and smiling brightly from her pocket and said in a determine voice," Mianhae appa, but I am missing him a lot. I will go back to Seoul whether you give me permission or not." She touch the little boys face in the photo and said, "Noona is coming for you. Just wait for noona. Mianhae, it took so much time to come back but now noona is going to fulfil her promise and come back. Wait for me. I am coming back and we will be together forever. I miss you alot and I am sure you haven't forgotten your noona." Saying this the girl hurriedly went to her room to pack her back and come back to Korea.

 

In Nickhuns house

 

"I am so tired," Ji hyo exclaimed after cleaning the entire house under Nickhuns supervision.

"How could you make a girl work this hard?" Ji hyo complained. 

What annoyed her most was that Nickhun ignored her complains and pretend to not hear it. This was the first time she felt this emotion and she was sure that she doesn't like it. "Yah, I am talking to you," saying this Ji hyo threw a sofa pillow which landed directly spot on Nickhuns face.

"Igemwoya?" Nickhun exclaimed after being startled by the pillow attack. "Have you gone crazy?" Nickhun ask

"I am hungry that's all," Ji hyo replied. "How can you make a person work this hard and not feed or even ask about food," Ji hyo complained

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happyasian #1
Hahahaha i like the cuteness of the story :)
lynn88mr #2
Chapter 4: I feel relieved seeing your improvement.... i could only point out one gramamr mistake at a time so that you will not be confused... use only root word after the word - to, will, would, could, can, shall, should, may and might. It should be " he was going to wake her up", not "he was going to woke her up". Try revise your chapter again... hope this will help... ^^
ahmefrance83 #3
Chapter 4: Thanks for the update Authornim! Please make it loooooooonger next time. It's too short. I wanna read more because your story is very interesting and nice!
Huhitscorn #4
Chapter 4: thanks for the update fighting update soon
Huhitscorn #5
Chapter 3: This is a great story authornim good job pls update
Ferry_Huo32 #6
Chapter 2: This is a great story so pls update soon fighting
stephanie1138 #7
Chapter 2: The story line is okay but try to improve the grammar.Hope you could improve by using 'lynn88mr' advice.
lynn88mr #8
Chapter 2: The story line is good... Gomawo is the correct word for thank you... but it was a bit confusing to differentiate between conversation among characters and your monologue, author-nim. I suggest you read a book or check out good fanfiction on this matter if you feel confused how to use the "". For example, ["Ah, see what you have done to me? I was just trying to greet you!" said Nickhun, feeling pissed. ] or ["Yah, I was right. You do like her, don't you?" asked wooyoung. ]. I hope this will help you a little bit.
shotstill75 #9
Chapter 2: Wah! This is good. Fightingggg!!!!
shuishui #10
Chapter 2: WOOO this story was amazing please write the next chapter