The feeling

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"Tring""Tring" Nickhun ring song ji hyo's doorbell as he anxiously waited for her arrival. He hopes that she is not sick and nothing serious happens to her

"Nuguseyo?" ji hyo ask while the sound of her footsteps coming downstairs towards the door could be heard very well

Nickhun thought of a quick idea to annoy her. He loves to see her annoyed and angry face so he continued to ring the bell much to ji hyo's annoyance

"Yah!! I can hear the ring very well so stop ringing it continuously," ji hyo screamed 

This didn't stop nickhun and he kept ringing the doorbell without failing

"I am coming!!" ji hyo screamed with her voice cracking. "Tring tring tring tring"

"Yah!! you are dead when I catch you," ji hyo screamed and from her tone it was sure that she is ready to kill someone. Ji hyo finally open the door and was furious.

"Do you really wanna di......," before ji hyo could complete her sentence nickhun fastly gave a peck of kiss on her lips. 

"You are very noisy. Hope that silents you," nickhun smirk and teased ji hyo. Ji hyo was frozen in her place. Her heart was beating like crazy. It was her first kiss and that too with the most unexpected person she could ever dream of. She didn't know how to respond or what to do.

"Wha-a-a-t are-e you doing h-ere?" ji hyo in her still frozen form stutteringly said

 

"I came to meet you," nickhun cooly replies even though he is trying to control his crazy heartbeat due to the kiss. Even though the kiss was just for a second, he could still feel the sensation of her soft lips and how good it feels when it touch his lips. He didn't understand how a kiss could make him feel soo happy and excited at the same time. He surely wanted to kiss her again but restraint himself. He couldn't control himself when he saw her and the urge was too strong that he kiss her. But this time he made sure not to do it again or else he was sure to be kick out which he surely can't afford for.

"I am good so now you should go home," j

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happyasian #1
Hahahaha i like the cuteness of the story :)
lynn88mr #2
Chapter 4: I feel relieved seeing your improvement.... i could only point out one gramamr mistake at a time so that you will not be confused... use only root word after the word - to, will, would, could, can, shall, should, may and might. It should be " he was going to wake her up", not "he was going to woke her up". Try revise your chapter again... hope this will help... ^^
ahmefrance83 #3
Chapter 4: Thanks for the update Authornim! Please make it loooooooonger next time. It's too short. I wanna read more because your story is very interesting and nice!
Huhitscorn #4
Chapter 4: thanks for the update fighting update soon
Huhitscorn #5
Chapter 3: This is a great story authornim good job pls update
Ferry_Huo32 #6
Chapter 2: This is a great story so pls update soon fighting
stephanie1138 #7
Chapter 2: The story line is okay but try to improve the grammar.Hope you could improve by using 'lynn88mr' advice.
lynn88mr #8
Chapter 2: The story line is good... Gomawo is the correct word for thank you... but it was a bit confusing to differentiate between conversation among characters and your monologue, author-nim. I suggest you read a book or check out good fanfiction on this matter if you feel confused how to use the "". For example, ["Ah, see what you have done to me? I was just trying to greet you!" said Nickhun, feeling pissed. ] or ["Yah, I was right. You do like her, don't you?" asked wooyoung. ]. I hope this will help you a little bit.
shotstill75 #9
Chapter 2: Wah! This is good. Fightingggg!!!!
shuishui #10
Chapter 2: WOOO this story was amazing please write the next chapter