title and graphic: 10/10 description: 10/10 characters: 10/10 plot and flow of the story: 30/30 grammar and writing style: 10/10 creativity and originality: 20/20 enjoyment of the staff/reviewer: 10/10
Chapter 4: Thank you for the honest review! :) I agree with what you mentioned; I do think I have some issues with my wording and phrasing, especially when I have a huge tendency to over complicate things. Also, very nice catch! I've always thought 'pretentious' has the same meaning as 'pretend', but it turns out I'm wrong. I guess that's something for me to take note in future stories. :) Once again, thank you, and I've credited the shop!
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