You Look So Precious (With Your Bloody Nose)

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Description

“You need to stop hating Chanyeol.  The hatred is unfounded; he’s actually pretty chill.”

“Chill?  Chanyeol has no chill.  He doesn’t even have Netflix.”

 

Hyejin’s life is one big cosmic joke.  The worst part is that no one else finds it as funny as she does.  However (and there is always a however), some misfortunes are more painful than others.  All it takes is one dead bird, a loose-limbed idiot, and one misstep for her life to go to hell.  To add to her dizzying woe, her grandmother is growing increasingly senile, her dad is a bit of a loose canon, she herself is experiencing mild head trauma, and the only person who is even moderately competent at dealing with all this is her greatest foe—Park Chanyeol.

Foreword

   This is an entry to the Tender Rose writing contest (click banner to check it out) hosted by Korekrypta and StarCross.

   CATEGORY/THEME: short haul/exodus |  PROJECTED LENGTH: one-shot

   There's also a playlist for this, literally just because I enjoy making playlists.  You can find it here.  It's only on Spotify right now, but I might be persuaded to put it on 8tracks if—plot twist!—anyone is interested enough.

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SoItellhersweetlies
#1
Chapter 1: Cute.....!
contaminated
#2
So like I at making comments half the time but this story made me laugh so hard???? It was really really good and I haven't read other stories like it before on AFF so good job, Aemelius or however the you spell that XS
TaeKaiNights
#3
Chapter 1: so cute!! really enjoyed it :)
SarangRae
#4
I think I've read this three times now. Well definitely at least twice. I still like it.
lolihatefic1 #5
Chapter 1: this is great tho i hate u but i love u
vividimole
#6
Chapter 1: This story isn't like anything I've read in this site. In a relatively small fic I felt like I spent a lifetime with these characters, while reading it. I loved the realistic informal speech and the way you used every single word in this story is admirable.
About the ending, at first it left me hanging. I was like "And now what? What is gonna happen next?", but overall the story was very enjoyable and sweet.
bohubear
#7
The backdrop of the action, the old-car, odd male character, the inform speech, the comedic effect of the situations the main finds herself in, the subtle jokes--everything was perfect. Some scenes in the beginning were a bit too descriptive, precisely the buildings and the road to her highschool, but that might just have something to do with my personal preferences. I adored, absolutely adored the fact that no romantic feelings were suddenly caught or found after she apologised for her unwarranted behaviour, because, more often than not, that's what happens in fanfiction and it's just not--realistic. A wonderful one-shot. Good job.