Surprise, Surprise

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“I—“ Lu han starts. “You’re breaking up with me, aren’t you?” he asks, unable to contain his emotions a little longer.

“What?” his boyfriend inquires, rather taken aback.

Foreword

Title: Surprise, Surprise

Pairing: KaiLu

Warnings: None (or maybe the fact that this piece was written in a rush)

Reason for posting: Because some friend decided to offer me a box of donuts in exchange of a fluffy KaiLu one-shot

This was based loosely on a song by Joe called Another Used to Be. Listen to it on Youtube before you read. ^^

Also dedicated to my mum who loves Michael Buble. Lol

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AnotherFairytale #1
Chapter 1: Oh well what else do I expect from KaiLu and a fluffy plot? Ahhh... awesomeness!!!
deerestkrrong #2
Chapter 1: OKAY. PLEASE LET ME BREATHE FIRST.
omg unnie how can you?!! insecure, clumsy luhan and over-the-top affectionate jongin!!
THIS IS JUST A PLAIN BALL OF SWEETNESS

" I won’t get ever get tired of seeing your things strewn all over our flat because they are a reminder that there’s a person living with me and that wonderful person is you." (how sweet can this get?)

" I really love you and I really think we’re going to be staying together for a long time—the longest ever..." (ugh jongin's such a sap)

okay so my feels are just raging and ohmygosh i love you already! ^^
kaisyacht #3
Chapter 1: Chapter 1: i am calm. i am calm. i am calm. I. AM. CALM.
im not T^T because when i get to the part where Jongin is hunched over looking at the blueprints i was like nooooooo he's only currently studying in my story and here you are writing an already engineer!jongin (i also had a fleeting thought of what my future would look like if i ever pass *shrinks in fear*). this honestly can be a good material for an epilogue of that or some sort of an idea idk. and when Luhan gave his two cents i was like, you also wrote a possible architect!luhan (TT^TT) i cannot take the feelings. it's too much.

i guess after going to school and wait for hours for professors that never came, this is just what i needed. but dang, the feels are hitting me straight in the face i cannot hide. i cannot abort. damn it you write so beautifully unnie, i don't know why you think otherwise.

and you just have to make Jongin use the endearment BABE orz i really like that character fans made of him. it makes him sound so y.

ps: i thought the donuts are for kaiyeol?
babybubbles #4
Chapter 1: I had a terrible day today but reading this Kailu's fluffiness made up for everything! Thank you for sharing! ^^
willswhisp #5
Chapter 1: My heart is overwhelmed, this was so cute and fluffy! Thank you!
darlya #6
Chapter 1: Oh gosh that was so cute ~T_T~
wanda22 #7
Chapter 1: Awwwwwwww...this is so sweet.. >.<
cambridgefight #8
Chapter 1: asdfelgnelngfkwjnfkwlafnwa;rwiqoruwqoirhiw this is soooo cute! :'D ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
chocoholichris #9
Chapter 1: omg I came across this by accident and this is the best thing that has happened all day to me! So fluffy adhjshduishidfhsi <3 <3
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