Chapter 1: OKAY. PLEASE LET ME BREATHE FIRST.
omg unnie how can you?!! insecure, clumsy luhan and over-the-top affectionate jongin!!
THIS IS JUST A PLAIN BALL OF SWEETNESS
" I won’t get ever get tired of seeing your things strewn all over our flat because they are a reminder that there’s a person living with me and that wonderful person is you." (how sweet can this get?)
" I really love you and I really think we’re going to be staying together for a long time—the longest ever..." (ugh jongin's such a sap)
okay so my feels are just raging and ohmygosh i love you already! ^^
Chapter 1: Chapter 1: i am calm. i am calm. i am calm. I. AM. CALM.
im not T^T because when i get to the part where Jongin is hunched over looking at the blueprints i was like nooooooo he's only currently studying in my story and here you are writing an already engineer!jongin (i also had a fleeting thought of what my future would look like if i ever pass *shrinks in fear*). this honestly can be a good material for an epilogue of that or some sort of an idea idk. and when Luhan gave his two cents i was like, you also wrote a possible architect!luhan (TT^TT) i cannot take the feelings. it's too much.
i guess after going to school and wait for hours for professors that never came, this is just what i needed. but dang, the feels are hitting me straight in the face i cannot hide. i cannot abort. damn it you write so beautifully unnie, i don't know why you think otherwise.
and you just have to make Jongin use the endearment BABE orz i really like that character fans made of him. it makes him sound so y.
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