Turn Back Time.

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So I stood there, feeling like I was on top of the world. And I closed my eyes before taking a step forward. Not seeing is not hard. But feeling is. But that's what I have been doing for the past ten years. It wasn't hard for me. The feeling of falling wasn't there anymore. I felt like I was flying instead. And when I reached the ground, my whole body ached. But because every inch of me was in pain, I couldn't feel anymore. I felt numb.

 
And slowly, I drifted away.

Foreword

 

It's been stuck on my head for days, no, weeks! And I just find myself randomly thinking about this but I can't bring myself to write a story because I don't have a good ending for it. And I don't like stories with endings that leave the readers hanging. Because I'm the kind of reader that don't like things like that.

But then again, why not make one and have an indefinite ending? So...what you're about to read is probably just a draft. I will make a longer one. Maybe. Maybe not. There's no guy or girl in the story. I'm just refering to them as he/she/him/her.

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Cherry_Drops #1
Chapter 1: its strange reading a story with no specified characters but the anonymity behind it gives the overall story a nice touch...i dont know, i think its just that the feeling of thinking this could be anyone, makes you empathise with the emotions and feelings being expressed even more.
And I'd like to believe that its not a dream and that he was actually able to make things right this time round. Though i feel sorry for his brother and his best friend who also likes her.
I know you wrote this a long time ago now but im really happy i somehow managed to come across this haha
ohmychul #2
It's really really good! :)
flabbycow #3
I love it. :)
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