Lost Love

Description

Ka Li Lee has always wonder who she was, all her life the only memory she rememebers was when she in the meadow with her young child hood friend, (Choi Seung-hyun). However, after 15 years she still does not clearly know who that boy was and how important he was to her. Ka Li only knows that her life in the state was something she wanted to run away from and just escape to that peaceful memory, that quiet meadow. After many suffering from living in the state and 15 years after the incident, Ka Li Lee decided to move back to Seoul, Korea so she can start over and possibly find a new purpose for living. 

Foreword

Well i have never really written a story before and i thought it would fun....so i hope you enjoy my story...any negative comments please keep them to yourself...:D 

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Anji_WantsTwiNKies #1
"I'll be right in front of your eyes."
Anji_WantsTwiNKies #2
lol it's a pretty good opening!!XD<br />
"15 years earlier in the past..." should be it's own sentence and italicized<br />
1st sentence: "House" => "Houses"<br />
2nd sentence: "Kai Li" => "Ka Li.."<br />
6th sentence: backspace a Space between "and" and "know", "born" and "already" and special is spelled wrong<br />
7th sentence: "Special" is spell wrong<br />
8th sentence: it is "reassurances"<br />
4th sentence to the end: "I’ll be right there for you" => "I'll right before your eyes." or whatever you want.:D<br />
Last sentence: "Present day 2011"- own sentence and italicized, backspace a space between "her" and "find"<br />
Uh, I think that's help right!!XD<br />
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