04 - beautiful stranger ;

what dreams are made of
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Notes: Just a little imagination for everyone because Kaistal is officially canon. ;; I'm so happy for them and I can't believe super low quality photos can be that beautiful until kaistal happened. Goodness.

Warning/s: unbeta-ed.

It was a little past two in the morning when they manage to get to her dorms. She's still wearing his green flannel that he insisted for her to wear. When they managed to get to her door, she turned to face him, all the while taking off his jacket to give it back. "You, take care."

He was quiet. He isn't replying and is only staring at her with that look.

"Hey?" She asked worriedly, moving to hold his arms, "You okay?"

He hums and nods twice.

"You're worried." She stated, "You're worried, aren't you?"

"Am I?"

She smiles sadly, "You are."

"Its just, you know some people, they make everything look bad when they don't like something."

Her hands moves from his arms to remove his blue cap on his head, and run her fingers to his hair to push it back before putting the cap back again. "We'll be fine." She smiles nostalgically, "Don't we always try to be fine?"

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dinobunny #1
Chapter 5: Dawww this was so cute !! Especially the ending eheheh
dinobunny #2
Chapter 3: /peeks out from my hole

Its been AGES since ive been on here and since ive read your writing hehe feels good to be back !!

Ive played cytus before too and i love the world youve created ahhhh i love scifi and how youve incoporated things like the cosmos and operators and the KAISTAL nwkjbeekihed its been sooo long

I missed you !!!
thelastghostgirl #3
Chapter 2: this story really reminds me of lauren oliver's book delirium because of the invalid characters and the mentioning of the word 'experiments' that had to be done by the government, either you inspired by her story or it just purely coincidence the story is amazing and has it all elements. It comes out nicely. Another good job from you shall I say.
dinobunny #4
Chapter 2: omg omg im loving this !!!!!
the whole invalids and regulars thing and kai and soojung and omg this whole world can be so much more developed pls plsplsplspls tell u youll consider developing this hoaghaorehrih <3 <3 <3
thelastghostgirl #5
Chapter 1: Okay. Sorry. This is my real thoughts about this story lol personally I thought it was amazingly done and very realistic. There weren't any embellishments or glorification. I really though this was a great way to pace the story and build up the suspense. I think, this story could've been longer, probably 10 chapters or more, you could mention why jongin so depressed and wanted to kill himself and how he met soojung. Although, well, it's not an easy subject to talk about, and suicide is not something to take lightly. You made an amazing start of taking a sensitive subject and if you want, you could writing a very touching, mesmerizing story.
thelastghostgirl #6
Chapter 1: TOO DEEP. TOO SHORT. TOO MANY FEELS.
dinobunny #7
Chapter 1: awww anigoahbglyea ;;;;;;;;
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