05 - ice & laces;

what dreams are made of
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skating!au (tho i don't really know anything about this sport gaaah. that and i'm uploading this using my phone so the format is probably weird xo)

 

 

Soojung is on the verge of crying because she's in the middle of people moving on and fro and she can't find her sister and her feet is killing her, not to mention one of the laces of her shoes had gone loose. She's holding on the railings with both of her hands and trying to balance herself because my sister is supposed to be teaching me but where is she?!

 

She tries looking for Sooyeon again and sighs, she feel so small at that moment and all she wanted is to just sit there at the ice. But no, it isn't a good idea, she's wearing her favorite pants. "Um." She muttered at the boy in front her, she can't get through without the boy moving because he's in front holding the rails that'll help her get out of that icy place. "Can I pass?"

 

"Oh." He moves a little so she could grab the rail and pull herself.

 

"Thanks."

 

He replied with a small quirk of his lips and she gets back on moving.

 

A few steps after, "Unnie could you let us through?"

 

Oh gods its the end of her--

 

"Here, you could hold my hand instead." the boy from earlier told the little girl in front of her. The girl, hesistantly, grabs his hand and he slowly led her back on the rails pass Soojung and did the same with the other kid.

 

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dinobunny
#1
Chapter 5: Dawww this was so cute !! Especially the ending eheheh
dinobunny
#2
Chapter 3: /peeks out from my hole

Its been AGES since ive been on here and since ive read your writing hehe feels good to be back !!

Ive played cytus before too and i love the world youve created ahhhh i love scifi and how youve incoporated things like the cosmos and operators and the KAISTAL nwkjbeekihed its been sooo long

I missed you !!!
thelastghostgirl #3
Chapter 2: this story really reminds me of lauren oliver's book delirium because of the invalid characters and the mentioning of the word 'experiments' that had to be done by the government, either you inspired by her story or it just purely coincidence the story is amazing and has it all elements. It comes out nicely. Another good job from you shall I say.
dinobunny
#4
Chapter 2: omg omg im loving this !!!!!
the whole invalids and regulars thing and kai and soojung and omg this whole world can be so much more developed pls plsplsplspls tell u youll consider developing this hoaghaorehrih <3 <3 <3
thelastghostgirl #5
Chapter 1: Okay. Sorry. This is my real thoughts about this story lol personally I thought it was amazingly done and very realistic. There weren't any embellishments or glorification. I really though this was a great way to pace the story and build up the suspense. I think, this story could've been longer, probably 10 chapters or more, you could mention why jongin so depressed and wanted to kill himself and how he met soojung. Although, well, it's not an easy subject to talk about, and suicide is not something to take lightly. You made an amazing start of taking a sensitive subject and if you want, you could writing a very touching, mesmerizing story.
thelastghostgirl #6
Chapter 1: TOO DEEP. TOO SHORT. TOO MANY FEELS.
dinobunny
#7
Chapter 1: awww anigoahbglyea ;;;;;;;;