02 - invalids ;

what dreams are made of
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SUMMARY: SOOJUNG FINALLY CORNERS THE INFAMOUS KAI BUT FOUND HERSELF IN A WHOLE DIFFERENT SITUATION.

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NOTES: ACCIDENTALLY INSPIRED BY THE BOOK DELIRIUM BY LAUREN OLIVER AS MENTIONED IN THE COMMENTS. THANK YOU!

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invalids;

“Kai,” She called, pointing the gun at the figure standing at the edge of the rooftop. “…just come with us. You’ve done enough.”

The figure chuckled. “Out of all people that were chasing me, it’s a girl who had me raising my hands.”

She breathes, “Turn around and give in. Please.”

“What if I don’t want to?”

“I’ll have to perform some protocol.” Soojung aims at Kai’s right leg. In the split second she pulled the trigger, it’s the same time that she felt a sudden presence at her back and the next moment, she had her hands pinned behind her, a hand hold holding both her wrist and another holding a gun to her neck.

She closes her eyes as she breathes heavily. “How about, you give up.”

“So I’m right.”

“About?” she can hear him breathe at the closeness of his mouth to her right ear. “About what?” He asked again when she didn’t answer after a few beats.

“About you being an Invalid.”

He chuckles again, “Now that you know, I would have to shut you up. Any last words?”

She swallows, “I don’t. But I have a question.”

He hums, “I guess we can hear that.”

“Why?” She exhales

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dinobunny
#1
Chapter 5: Dawww this was so cute !! Especially the ending eheheh
dinobunny
#2
Chapter 3: /peeks out from my hole

Its been AGES since ive been on here and since ive read your writing hehe feels good to be back !!

Ive played cytus before too and i love the world youve created ahhhh i love scifi and how youve incoporated things like the cosmos and operators and the KAISTAL nwkjbeekihed its been sooo long

I missed you !!!
thelastghostgirl #3
Chapter 2: this story really reminds me of lauren oliver's book delirium because of the invalid characters and the mentioning of the word 'experiments' that had to be done by the government, either you inspired by her story or it just purely coincidence the story is amazing and has it all elements. It comes out nicely. Another good job from you shall I say.
dinobunny
#4
Chapter 2: omg omg im loving this !!!!!
the whole invalids and regulars thing and kai and soojung and omg this whole world can be so much more developed pls plsplsplspls tell u youll consider developing this hoaghaorehrih <3 <3 <3
thelastghostgirl #5
Chapter 1: Okay. Sorry. This is my real thoughts about this story lol personally I thought it was amazingly done and very realistic. There weren't any embellishments or glorification. I really though this was a great way to pace the story and build up the suspense. I think, this story could've been longer, probably 10 chapters or more, you could mention why jongin so depressed and wanted to kill himself and how he met soojung. Although, well, it's not an easy subject to talk about, and suicide is not something to take lightly. You made an amazing start of taking a sensitive subject and if you want, you could writing a very touching, mesmerizing story.
thelastghostgirl #6
Chapter 1: TOO DEEP. TOO SHORT. TOO MANY FEELS.
dinobunny
#7
Chapter 1: awww anigoahbglyea ;;;;;;;;