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#SQUAD - SM Entertainment's New Badass Boy Group - Apply Open
Baek Jung Il // Taka
fortuna / ayana / vixx ravi / original / group member / accepted
the first applicant! huggles u tbh. hi ayana!! i hope its okay with you but i decided to use ravi as the faceclaim bc he has more pictures than the one ok rock dude. but omg the umma of the group i can imagine it already. there were no problems with your app, it was actually perfect bows down to you thats so sad that the girl he got pregnant died tho ;;;;; but his daughter is so cute omf them cheeks. ahemmm anyways his background and personality were well written, since he's really chill i could imagine the other members listening to him instead of the leader lol. but your app was rlly good, thank you for applying < 3
Kim Young Jin // Blue
iheartbts / dev / nam joo hyuk / new / red velvet's yeri / accepted
heyy dev, first off i wanna say i love nam joo hyuk- he's so asdfghjkl. i find it cute how he's always happy and a tryhard. but good job making him a blunt lil too bc it'll start drama and who doesn't love drama : ))) byun taehwans not a real underground rapper rite? i looked him up lmaoo. tbh i can't imagine blue having iron's voice bc its raspy and blues face doesnt go with that at all but looks can be deceiving i guess, but its ok bc i freakin love iron. i also like the whole distrack idea with taehwan. but omg omg yeri and blue---- i ship tbvh. i can imagine them holding hands and doing cutesy together fuifj;isodjfro. btw i love so dangerous by up10tion i listened to it so many times today. anywayss tank you for applying < 3
Kyle Bok // Kyu.B
equinoxstar / maree / b2st's kikwang / new / group member / accepted
hola maree! i chose kikwang over aron bc he has more pictures and stuff. but anyways i could see kyle being a good leader, he'll have his little tantrum fits when they don't listen to him lol. but omg the thing tho- thats no no smh. i just realized kyle is basically a addict, watches him try to have with every member tbh.  itll be my first time writing omg i'll try not to it up lol. i really like kyle tho and kyu,b's a cool stage name. thank you for applying < 3
Ho Min Young // Minyoung
reinas / lucy / monsta x's wonho / new / none / accepted
hi hi lucy! i was surprised by his name bc minyoungs def a girl name to me but its unique so i like it : ))) he'll def get made fun of for that though. you're the first one to put fashion links! i love those! i relly liked his background bc it was nice and detailed. thats cool how he was gonna be in bts and i like his relationship with the bts members. there will definitely be a scandal with wendy though haha. but he had a potty mouth during that interview smh @ him. and btw he doesn't have to have a love interest if you dont want him to. but anyways there was nothing wrong w your app. thanks for applying < 3
Hyeon Ki Conner Go // Conner
jewel_elf / krissy / lee jong suk / NEW / red velvet's joy / error
hey krissy~  first off i wanna say that lee jong suk is fine af ahem & i love the name conner idky. but he is the definition of a flowerboy. i thought i would have to tell you to change it because everyone uses it but i guess not. there are just a few things i want you to fix. i want you to elaborate more in the personality section. describe every single one of the personality traits. for example if he's emotional talk about how he cries everytime they win an award or something. also the password was wrong, someone didnt read the ruulesss tsk tsk tsk lol. but other than that everythings okay, just fix those two and your app will be perfect thanks for applying < 3
Ahn Shi Jong // Shijong
chakayuko / sori / n.flying chahun / ORIGINAL / group member / error
Hey Sori. First off, i like how he's not as good looking as other idols and isn't as skinny. I was laughing at what his middle school gf told him lol. But I'm wondering why SM didn't force him to have surgery like other idols, did he refuse or did they just not bring it up? But I found it really cool that he could speak arab, i dont recall one idol that can do that : )) His personality is literally the best, he seems like the only one in the squad that has sense lol even though he's a little off himself. His ocd problem is crazzzyyy- i could imagine other idols looking at him weird for things he's said to them. I like the idea of him having a best friend in squad, they could be like hajin and kyungjong from shut up flower boy band lmao. I appreciated how you explained all his likes and dislikes but the thing with the fans giving him the doll, thats so messed up omg. Their bad fans man. And and omf i can imagine #squad being on weekly idol and they keep nagging at him to speak faster bc he's wasting time lol. Your application would be perfect but you're just missing one thing, you forgot to put a persona. Anyways I really liked your character, thanks for applying < 3
Kim Kyung Pyo // Reo
tapi5ka / jay / ji chang wook / NEW / snsd tiffany / accepted
Sup Jay. First off I really liked how you split the personality into different sections and bolded the traits, it really helped me understand his personality. But he's such a quiet and awkward little pringle lol. At least he's a good go to person when someone wants to rant about something. And that reading minds talent he has is really cool. Honestly I didnt think he would be a trouble maker as a kid with the way his personality is now. But for some reason i find it adorable how his best friend is taeyeon and they're also cousins lol. Im surprised by how many idol friends he has though since hes an awkward person. Minho's his rival ;;;;; but hes so precious otl. I love minho, I'll come up with a reason Minho hates him and make it all dramatic and stuff bc drama is the best :)). I like how you explained the likes, dislikes and hobbies and how you put lot of trivia and habits, i have a feeling he'll hate staying at #squads dorm bc itll be loud most of the time and "really" will probably the most used word in his vocabulary lol. For the two trainees that bothered him I'm gonna make them two of the original #squad members. More drama yayy. Anyways thanks for applying < 3
Ahn Sungjung // Sungjung
PENENGLISH31 / mont / seventeen's mingyu / ORIGINAL / red velvet irene / error
Hi mont. You used Mingyu has faceclaim skixkslckd but the way you described him makes him sound even cuter tbh. The abs and the light brown eyes : ). You just forgot to fill out the style section. Also in the personality section i don't get what you mean by straight and rough actions, from what i read he seems a little hot headed sometimes. But can you give an example of his actions that are this way. Also in the background can you explain how his parents went broke because it seemed kind of random But his friendship with Jackson tho i can imagine them being loud and crazy together lol. Since his rival is taeyong and he likes irene, I think it'll be better to make Sungjungs love interest irene instead of krystal because more drama yayyyy. You put a lot of scene requests too. I'll try to do all of them. Thanks for applying < 3
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penenglish31 #1
Chapter 2: Thanks for reviewing ^^
And I already edit in what you comment for.
I don't know I understand in same way that you want to tell me. But I tried the best for it ^^
And I design to change a little bit in his personality because I can't explain about some word.
Also cut Jackson out because I think it is too random too XD
Jewel_ELF
#2
Chapter 2: Ok, so i fixed conner, would you be able to go over my app once more?
Tapi5Ka
#3
Chapter 4: Nice teaser and might I say it was very creative using those little emoji's as the characters that's new. As for the chapter it was very interesting and I can see that these four are very close indeed like brothers. Looking forward to more.
WishUponARose
#4
Chapter 4: OMG that, That was so funny~~! Love how you put emojis as there names its was funny. Good first teaser
penenglish31 #5
Chapter 4: I love how you put emoji as their name.
It make story fun XD
equinoxstar
#6
Chapter 4: lololol the emojis instead of their names tho-- priceless
and I love the one guys' mom and lee soo man, hilarious!!
penenglish31 #7
Chapter 3: Can I still apply for?
Tapi5Ka
#8
Chapter 2: Thank you for your review. I thought that his awkwardness would make him interesting added to his ability to read people. Taeyeon is life for me lol but I thought that them being polar opposites would make the relationship more exciting. Minho is actually cool person but he seemed like the perfect rival for me lol.