007 - Interlude

Hall of Faces
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The acolytes and priests of the Temple worked through the night to clear away the rubble from the attack, and with nothing better to do, Sungjoo decided to help them. He still wasn't sure what to do or where to go, but by the time the sun began to rise over Atherpefta, he knew what he needed to do first.

Despite the efforts of the workers, the main hall was still a wreck by the time the first petitioners began to gather. Yixuan stood with a frown on his face as he surveyed the dusty, blood stained hall; with most of the rubble from broken artwork cleared, it was now just a matter of deep cleaning. "I am afraid I will have to turn people away," he lamented, his voice soft. Sungjoo could feel the pain in his voice at those words, and though he felt an echo inside of him, he had the feeling that those emotions were Siakera's and not his own.

When Yixuan headed for the door to the temple to go speak with the people gathered, Sungjoo followed, deciding that it was best to take his leave before he wore out his welcome. Not that he was getting any of those feelings from the people of the White Temple, but despite all that had happened, he couldn't yet feel comfortable there. He had a lot to come to terms with, not only of his own soul and actions in his life, but also in regards to settling the score with Kergisa.

He paused to wait in the hallway when Yixuan stepped out onto the steps in front of the temple, his arms outspread to motion for silence. The crowd obeyed almost immediately, their faces turned expectantly toward their High Priest. "Worshipers of the mother goddess, welcome. We had a... disturbance... last night, and I am afraid that-"

"We are here to help," a man called out, stepping out of the crowd to a murmur of agreement from his fellows. Sungjoo recognized him as the young man that Yixuan had healed the night that he had tried to assassinate the man, his blisters and sores now fully gone from his body. He motioned around him and turned to the High Priest with a smile on his face. "Many of us heard the fight last night but the temple was sealed, we could not come to your aid. If you will let us, we would help you to clean and fix this holy place."

Yixuan's oval face showed

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DGNA_Forever
#1
Chapter 19: This was a great story. I love where it took me and I found myself captivated by the chapters and the complexity of this. The ending was so good, and I love how you shaped Sungjoo especially. Thank you for writing this.
DGNA_Forever
#2
Chapter 15: I love how much emotion you put into this, and Wenhan is such a well-rounded character. Even though he's not "good", he's so human I that makes him very relatable. And now with him leaving Yibo behind instead of killing him or allowing him to hinder his mission shows that he does have a small bit of compassion for him. Now I'm worried for Sungjoo, though.
DGNA_Forever
#3
Chapter 12: Poor Yibo. I feel bad for the kid. But I also feel bad for Wenhan. He might actually wake up now and realize that he really was set up by his goddess and that she doesn't care about him. And his back story...
DGNA_Forever
#4
Chapter 11: It sounds like Sungjoo is learning compassion and how caring some people can be, so I hope that will help him.
DGNA_Forever
#5
Chapter 9: This was a deep chapter, and I love how you put Wenhan's perspective in there. I don't feel bad for him, and he'll learn the correct path one way or another. And Sungjoo's journey has begun. I hope he succeeds in this. His brother's soul depends on it, after all.
DGNA_Forever
#6
Chapter 6: Wenhan is a little scary and it takes a psychopath to smile while killing someone. I agree with Sungjoo that there might not be any good in Wenhan, but since Yixuan sees it, maybe there is.
DGNA_Forever
#7
Chapter 5: Now it makes sense why she didn't save Seungyeon's life, and it's truly heartbreaking. He did it to protect Sungjoo and likely spare him the pain and struggle of supporting them both, as well as taking his own pain away. Now I hope Sungjoo will make the right decision.
DGNA_Forever
#8
Chapter 3: What's sad is that all he wanted in the first place was for the goddess to show mercy and heal his brother, and I can see why he had turned to this path, after the betrayal that she offered instead. Now I have to wonder if that's part of the reason he was stopped this time, or if this priest is really so important that she needed to protect him.
DGNA_Forever
#9
Chapter 1: I feel bad for him, and am curious about where his path will lead next. Sungjoo seems like he does have a good heart, despite possibly working for the wrong cause.
St-renaissance
#10
Chapter 3: I need to work but I'm so engrossed in this lol