Epilogue

Hall of Faces
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Sungjoo lay in the slightly lumpy bed, his shaggy hair splayed out on the pillow under his head as he stared up at the log ceiling, recalling the events of the past two days. He had thought that he would die in the temple of Kergisa, thought that Wenhan would succeed in murdering him, and had been shocked when the other man had simply left after stabbing him. Seungyeon, though physically a young man now, didn't have the life experience to know how to treat Sungjoo's wound, and at his brother's urging, had left to find help.

Sungjoo hadn't expected the form that help would take, though. When Seungyeon returned with Yibo and Jungsu, the caravan master, Sungjoo thought that he had fallen into delirium. But then the young acolyte pulled a medallion of Siakera from his pocket and began to pray, and the goddess had appeared to kneel beside Sungjoo.

He didn't think that the others could see her, since no one else gave a start at her appearance, but she smiled and leaned down close to him. "He prays for your healing, Sungjoo, even though he is not yet a priest," she had told him, amusement in her voice. "I will grant it, as I favor him strongly. He has such potential to do good in the world, and despite what Therisa said about us doing whatever we want, she is wrong. We have power, yes, but power must be used for something. Consistency in our actions provides our followers with a surety of what they can ask for, and encouraging good behaviors means that they will t

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DGNA_Forever
#1
Chapter 19: This was a great story. I love where it took me and I found myself captivated by the chapters and the complexity of this. The ending was so good, and I love how you shaped Sungjoo especially. Thank you for writing this.
DGNA_Forever
#2
Chapter 15: I love how much emotion you put into this, and Wenhan is such a well-rounded character. Even though he's not "good", he's so human I that makes him very relatable. And now with him leaving Yibo behind instead of killing him or allowing him to hinder his mission shows that he does have a small bit of compassion for him. Now I'm worried for Sungjoo, though.
DGNA_Forever
#3
Chapter 12: Poor Yibo. I feel bad for the kid. But I also feel bad for Wenhan. He might actually wake up now and realize that he really was set up by his goddess and that she doesn't care about him. And his back story...
DGNA_Forever
#4
Chapter 11: It sounds like Sungjoo is learning compassion and how caring some people can be, so I hope that will help him.
DGNA_Forever
#5
Chapter 9: This was a deep chapter, and I love how you put Wenhan's perspective in there. I don't feel bad for him, and he'll learn the correct path one way or another. And Sungjoo's journey has begun. I hope he succeeds in this. His brother's soul depends on it, after all.
DGNA_Forever
#6
Chapter 6: Wenhan is a little scary and it takes a psychopath to smile while killing someone. I agree with Sungjoo that there might not be any good in Wenhan, but since Yixuan sees it, maybe there is.
DGNA_Forever
#7
Chapter 5: Now it makes sense why she didn't save Seungyeon's life, and it's truly heartbreaking. He did it to protect Sungjoo and likely spare him the pain and struggle of supporting them both, as well as taking his own pain away. Now I hope Sungjoo will make the right decision.
DGNA_Forever
#8
Chapter 3: What's sad is that all he wanted in the first place was for the goddess to show mercy and heal his brother, and I can see why he had turned to this path, after the betrayal that she offered instead. Now I have to wonder if that's part of the reason he was stopped this time, or if this priest is really so important that she needed to protect him.
DGNA_Forever
#9
Chapter 1: I feel bad for him, and am curious about where his path will lead next. Sungjoo seems like he does have a good heart, despite possibly working for the wrong cause.
St-renaissance
#10
Chapter 3: I need to work but I'm so engrossed in this lol