Prologue

Overdose

 

The coach hadn’t previously been this comfortable, or maybe it was just his drowsy head. Tao didn’t really know which one was true or not but there was something about the peace and quiet of the dorms, just being able to slumber and not have it all stressing out on him that was lovely.

 

He also felt as though someone had bundled him up in a thick, too warm blanket and it was just the right time to lull himself off to sleep in a happy state of freedom the likes of which he had not had in a very long time.

 

For the first time there was no pain coming from his feet, no hidden grimaces as something stretched and tore…no worries about trying to hide any smatters of blood that were coming from his abused feet.

 

There was just a thick, heavy silence that was too hard to get up from and Tao welcomed it.

 

He tried to think about other things, wondered what he was watching on the television but the darkness just crept in, slowly and softly as if someone was embracing him gently.

 

The peace reigned for a long time and things just were.

 

Vaguely at first but growing stronger, the young Chinese singer became aware of two voices arguing with one another, though really it was only once voice complaining whilst the other was just trying to sooth the worries of the first speaker.

 

Or at least that’s what it sounded like to him.

 

“Man,” he complained, finding his voice through the fog, “Gege’s are so noisy.”

 

That immediately stopped the two voices with gasps of surprise and fear.

 

Tao suddenly opened his eyes and found himself no longer in the dorm but someplace else.

 

And Yifan and Luhan were staring at him with shocked expressions

 

Quietly he turned back, looking towards the place where his body lay looking so calm and peaceful and he tried to piece together what had happened to make him die… 

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Exobaeby #1
Chapter 7: I rambled so much I didn't answer your question - if you did more, I would be interested to see the remaining 9 die together, like a crash or something (god forbid!) I'm not satan I swear! but since the kriao were based on real-life what-ifs, idk how you would do the others. If they all went together to join kriao it would be super sad but like, yay reunited! & you won't have to write a scene about sm explaining why this group keeps dying one by one & is still around :9 just my idea.

Ps you are really good at describing scenes in a way that's easily visualised.
Exobaeby #2
Chapter 7: What a journey. I found this trilogy when looking for taoris angst and it delivered. I'm a new Exo fan but not new to Kpop so I knew they left but not the details. Once I learned it & how they were called traitors, I thought "does an idol have to die on stage for fans/companies to do better be more understanding?!" since they only left after being sick & mistreated. So in a weird way I'm glad you wrote out how that could happen! Because honestly these scenarios could have happened irl. I love that you had the others be emotional (the bit where Suho begs the picture of Krishan to spare Tao like he knew what would happen moved me), that you kept the ot12 brotherhood going (it's my favourite thing) and gave bittersweet endings. I appreciate you a lot for writing these, author. I love angst anyway so killing off my biases is right up my street hehe
Philosophies
#3
Chapter 7: This story arc is beautiful omigosh.
kennocha #4
Chapter 7: Alright now, why did I just cry??
springjasmine91
#5
Chapter 7: I promised myself not to cry but goodness I don't care anymore. Well done
BookWorm61 #6
Chapter 7: I'm imagining the photo and the visual I have makes my heart warm :3

About continuing the story, I would be curious of how it'd turn out but maybe not all the members? Because if you kill all of them off one by one like how Kris, Luhan and Tao died, that's not okay for their mental health to be completely honest. For example is Sehun in this story. With how devastated he was over Tao's death, imagine how bad it would become if, let say, Kai died. Other than Sehun, Suho might even go crazy because of guilt even if the others say it's not his fault. Not to mention the mental stress we'd get to have all of them die, even if it's in this deathau....

Conclusion: Sure, go ahead but maybe continue until there's only six of them left or until they sue the damn company who was slowly killing them. And I agree with KouAkira, I'm curious about TaoRisHan too! Anyway, another great job, author-nim! :D
KouAkira #7
Chapter 7: Taohun friendship was very nice and cute ;___; And about continue writing the story, it might be good if you have and idea to write it :) though I am more now curious abou how did TaoRisHan feel while they watch everyone celebrate XD
BookWorm61 #8
Chapter 6: Sadly I don't have a pororo plushie but I'd definitely join Sehun in running around and making aeroplane noises. I always enjoy these parts of your series and the later chapters because it gives off a bittersweet feeling when they have to let go of Kris, Luhan and Tao but at least they can still move on without forgetting all their memories together. Can't wait for the next chapters.
Author-nim fighting!
EXO_Trash #9
Chapter 6: Ladies and Gentlemen, don't go through Taohun pics before you read this story, you'll end up a hot mess :'( :'( :'( :'(