Missed Chances

Description

My voice is soft but stern; a warning that now is neither the time nor place. From now on, the time will never come. This is something I've told myself constantly for I know this is the only way we can carry on.

Foreword

He'd spoken too late. Now, he really feels the weight of that mistake.

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Putririseyo #1
Chapter 1: To be honest, I love Chaerin to be pair with everyone
This story is just so sad and kinda... I don't know what to say, Seunghyun makes me feel sad
Amalya
#2
Chapter 1: Well this was delightfully bittersweet. The words spoken too late and the opportunity missed. It's such a painful situation to be in, for both sides. You captured it well. Writing in first person helps that but there were moments the descriptions and sentences felt strange. I'm not even sure I can pinpoint them myself, for which I apologize. Maybe it is simply because I am not used to reading things in this perspective. haha

The emotions were certainly there and you gave enough history between them to let us know what had happened and why things were the way they were now. I definitely feel for Seunghyun. Especially because Chaerin gets her happy ending. But that's part of life and it's nice that she keeps trying to check on him, make sure he's holding up well, and all that. Still friends even after. *sighs sadly*

I could totally imagine Seungri making that comment on the dance floor. Cheeky bugger. hehe And even if the story was more bittersweet for the main characters, I'm glad to see that it had a mostly happy ending overall. Quite the interesting read. Thank you for sharing. ^_^
littletea
#3
Chapter 1: Ugh... ㅠㅠ my poor baby seunghyunnie.. But i love jae too.. But most of all i love chae.. So i was like.. Ugh i want them both to end up with her lolololol.. Anyway.. This is so good *sobs*
miicodin
#4
Chapter 1: That hit me right in the feels.
fitrifeehily #5
Chapter 1: OMG you're back!!!!!
Awwww, make it longer author-nim...
I miss JaexChae pairing...
Hope to see your other stories...
Love ya! Great job! Next time add Chun n Jun chan too... ^^
bmsqrdd #6
Chapter 1: awwwww ;;;;;;;;;; so bittersweet
Topu-Da
#7
Chapter 1: jae and CL...i hope they end up together. can you write a romance series on Junsu and Son Ga-in? i like their pairing.
2nexo2nexo #8
Chapter 1: Good job authornim it was cute
2nexo2nexo #9
Chapter 1: My both ultimate biases CL and Jaejoong