Everything Strawberry: A Writing Contest by ichigosama

 

Until Tomorrow (Sapphireyes)

 

Spelling and Grammar (19/20)

 

Content (28/30)

 

Relevance to the prompt (18/20)

 

Description and Title (14/20)

In my opinion, the title was good actually. It made me wonder what ‘until tomorrow’ pertained to. But, the description was lacking in some parts. As you can see, as a reader, the description would be the 2nd most important part for me to continue reading a fanfic. I think you should add some stuff to it.

 

Graphics (6/10)

The poster was good but it does not have a background, so minus points for that.

 

Strawberry Lips (Tsukiko)

 

Spelling and Grammar (17/20)

 

Content (27/30)

 

Relevance to the Prompt (13/20)

 

Description and Title (16/20)

The title was okay, though I knew that the story would be about a person with strawberry lips. The description was okay. It was the kind of description that would make a reader click next.

 

Graphics (8/10)

There was a poster and a background, though the poster was quite bright for me. I don’t know why, maybe my eyes are at fault. The background was also distracting. Sorry.

 

Cigarettes, Coffee, and Strawberries (hyun)

 

Spelling and Grammar (19/20)

 

Content (30/30)

 

Relevance to the prompt (20/20)

 

Description and Title (18/20)

The title gave out this cozy feeling, and it got me interested.

 

Graphics (9/10)

The graphics were simple, but eye-catching.

 

 

 

Novelty (shiningangelmel)

 

Spelling and Grammar (18/20)

 

Content (29/30)

 

Relevance to the prompt (20/20)

 

Description and Title (19/20)

The title was really good. The word ‘novelty’ has plenty of definitions, and I wasn’t sure which definition the title pertained to. The description was really good, it has that factor which is really important for the readers to continue reading your story.

 

Graphics (10/10)

The poster looks nice, and the background doesn’t hurt my eyes, and it was not bothersome at all. So you nailed this portion.

 

My Heart is Yours (HyperAnimeFangirl)

 

Spelling and Grammar (20/20)

 

Content (30/30)

 

Relevance to the prompt (19/20)

 

Description and Title (18/20)

The title was good, the description was poetic, and I liked how you constructed it. It was well-done.

 

Graphics (9/10)

The black and white motif of the poster fits the story well. The background was not distracting, it’s cool.

 

Begin Again

 

Spelling and Grammar (18/20)

 

Content (28/30)

 

Relevance to the prompt (18/20)

 

Description and Title (17/20)

The title had great impact, but the description’s theme was too common.

 

Graphics (8/10)

The background fitted the fluffy theme, but the poster had that sort of angst-like feel.

 

Because I’m Curious (TeatimeTaemint)

 

Spelling and Grammar (19/20)

 

Content (27/30)

 

Relevance to the prompt (17/20)

 

Description and Title (15/20)

The title is kind of misleading, but the description was well-written. Nice job.

 

Graphics (7/10)

The poster was plain, the background was also plain. So, this is the highest that I can give you.

 

Strawberry Fields Forever: Because you might grow distant (xLustx)

 

Spelling and Grammar (18/20)

 

Content (29/30)

 

Relevance to the prompt (20/20)

 

Description and Title (20/20)

 

Graphics (10/10)

 

Finding Sweets in Bitter Places (BitterSweetAAS)

 

Spelling and Grammar (20/20)

 

Content (20/30)

 

Relevance to the prompt (19/20)

 

Description and Title (18/20)

 

Graphics (4/10)

 

My First Bite (2minnieyah)

 

Spelling and Grammar (19/20)

 

Content (30/30)

 

Relevance to the prompt (20/20)

 

Description and Title (17/20)

 

Graphics (6/10)

 

Birthday Wish (iWantSushi)

 

Spelling and Grammar (19/20)

 

Content (28/30)

 

Relevance to the prompt (20/20)

 

Description and Title (17/20)

 

Graphics (8/10)

 

Desperately Needed (shineeg2232)

 

Spelling and Grammar (20/20)

 

Content (30/30)

 

Relevance to the prompt (20/20)

 

Description and Title (18/20)

 

Graphics (10/10)

 

This and Quite Possibly That (haesthetics)

 

Spelling and Grammar (19/20)

 

Content (30/30)

 

Relevance to the prompt (17/20)

 

Description and Title (20/20)

 

Graphics (9/10)

 

One Heart, with Two Owners (SkiptheBlipp)

 

Spelling and Grammar (/20)

 

Content (/30)

 

Relevance to the prompt (/20)

 

Description and Title (/20)

 

Graphics (/10)

 

36 Saturdays (kitty9879)

 

Spelling and Grammar (19/20)

 

Content (27/30)

 

Relevance to the prompt (20/20)

 

Description and Title (18/20)

 

Graphics (9/10)

 

Fragola Caffeina (conTAEMINated)

 

Spelling and Grammar (18/20)

 

Content (25/30)

 

Relevance to the prompt (20/20)

 

Description and Title (18/20)

 

Graphics (10/10)

 

You Are My Only Embrace (tresfuch)

 

Spelling and Grammar (20/20)

 

Content (30/30)

 

Relevance to the prompt (19/20)

 

Description and Title (19/20)

 

Graphics (10/10)

 

A Letter To My Everything (Bronny)

 

Spelling and Grammar (17/20)

 

Content (27/30)

 

Relevance to the prompt (16/20)

 

Description and Title (18/20)

 

Graphics (10/10)

 

Room, please, strawberry scented, equipped with fields of cacti and my first crush (Ellhar)

 

Spelling and Grammar (19/20)

 

Content (30/30)

 

Relevance to the prompt (18/20)

 

Description and Title (18/20)

 

Graphics (9/10)

 

Angel (YonHye)

 

Spelling and Grammar (17/20)

 

Content (28/30)

 

Relevance to the prompt (20/20)

 

Description and Title (18/20)

 

Graphics (10/10)

 

letters from cupid {painted blind} (jbmaunier)

 

Spelling and Grammar (20/20)

 

Content (30/30)

 

Relevance to the prompt (20/20)

 

Description and Title (18/20)

 

Graphics (9/10)

 

Lucid (abarofsoap)

 

Spelling and Grammar (19/20)

 

Content (30/30)

 

Relevance to the prompt (18/20)

 

Description and Title (18/20)

 

Graphics (10/10)

 

Drive (hisgloriousthighs)

 

Spelling and Grammar (19/20)

 

Content (29/30)

 

Relevance to the prompt (18/20)

 

Description and Title (14/20)

 

Graphics (4/10)

 

With The Taste of Strawberries (Lyakun)

 

Spelling and Grammar (19/20)

 

Content (28/30)

 

Relevance to the prompt (19/20)

 

Description and Title (18/20)

 

Graphics (9/10)

 

Nalgae (CupcakesandTae)

 

Spelling and Grammar (19/20)

 

Content (29/30)

 

Relevance to the prompt (20/20)

 

Description and Title (20/20)

 

Graphics (8/10)

 

Light Up Your Eyes (Isadora_Quagmire)

 

Spelling and Grammar (20/20)

 

Content (30/30)

 

Relevance to the prompt (20/20)

 

Description and Title (19/20)

 

Graphics (9/10)

 

 

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Isadora_Quagmire
#1
OMO. I got quite nice marks~

Thank you? **blushes** I just had a friend read the fic yesterday night, for reasons, and she was pulled to tears, so I was just thinking about what happened to the contest.

Thank you for the encouragement ^_____^