Chapter 1: What just happened, indeed? This first chapter definitely has me wanting to read more chapters. Your writing style makes the story feel very intimate and vivid. The mom and dad have such a cute husband/wife rapport... Christopher comes off as very warm and loving even when teasing his sister... I'm curious about what situation has caused V to stay with Christopher's family for the night and I surmise that he's the one who was screaming and sobbing. I have a feeling that Aneya and V's relationship is going to be full of intense and cute moments. I hope you do update this story, but if you don't I'll just come back and reread this chapter over. The writing is just very conversational, very inviting!!! Great job!!!!
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