First Sight

Description

He hummed as he aligned the flower pots. Peonies, roses, anemones. Beautiful pastel color dancing before his eyes. Jonghyun was never a big fan of something so girly, but his noona does, and that was what matters today. To make everything perfect for his sister, his only family.

Foreword

It's been awhile since I wrote anything like this and honestly I'm not really satisfied with the way it turned out, but here it goes!

The story itself is a short oneshot, a play on the "love at first sight" theme. Well, it might be a bit cliche, but I think the story is a good warm up. I really consider writing again (and finishing my negclected, unfinished stories).

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ROMEO_SHINee #1 Dec 9, 2023 14:29:59

Chapter 1: Oh no.... Jjong T^T

vicistar #2 May 26, 2018 20:33:02

Chapter 1: This is sad but i laughed at the last remarks lol sorry jjong XD

loveyfan95 #3 Oct 28, 2015 15:41:45

Chapter 1: This story needs more chapters authornim please

lwyCarmen #4 Jul 31, 2015 19:05:04

Chapter 1: That's tragedy sobs.

jhengchie #5 Jul 31, 2015 13:41:03

Chapter 1: This needs another chapter!!!! Moooorrrreeee

KimGennaRae #6 Jul 30, 2015 22:26:24

THERE HAS TO BE MORE! OMG. IM FREAKING OUT! THIS WAS SO GOOD!

Omg. Sorry. It's was very good. I hope there's more.

syran-night #7 Jul 30, 2015 20:47:40

Chapter 1: Awww... poor jjongie. I liked this. It was simple but it expressed what it needed to and I still felt the sting when Onew introduced himself even though I knew it was him. All and all I'd say it was a job well done. It's funny how both brother and sister find Jinki to be 'the one'. I wonder if it's because they are so close that even their types of men are similar. Interesting..... I wouldn't mind for more if you want, but I'll understand if you didn't. You wouldn't want it to be too cliche and that could happen if you expanded on this.... Anyway I'm just rambling now. Good story.