Promise
Description
In which a simple meeting at the Library makes Sehun has those fluttering feelings all over his stomach. All thanks to a particular gorgeous brunette that he find there.
Foreword
Sehun groaned when Jackson, his dear friend, decided to disturb his precious Sunday with dragging him off to Library to find the material for his thesis. Unlike Sehun, who already graduated not too long ago, Jackson still suffering from the darkness depth of a hell called university.
Jackson excused himself as soon as the two arrived at Library and Sehun scoffed in disbelief but nonetheless, he started to stroll around by himself, thinking something along the line ‘Fine, leave me all you want, stupid moron. It’s not like I can’t go wander alone on my own here and get lost’. He regretted his decision to join Jackson to the Library at first, if it was not for the beautiful girl with long brown locks whom sitting alone in the farthest table in Literature section.
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PS: it's actually a special oneshot I dedicated toward my old friend, inayester, for her 21th birthday two years ago :) go check some of her works (she also writes lot of amazing sestal stories) and leave a positive feedback if you can ;)
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Review for the story:
1. Noewriter:
Personally I loved the story. There were a lot of typos but the story overall was still understandable. I think the plot was good and to be honest was disappointed when it ended since I liked it so much. I would, and I will, definitely check out more of your stories. The plot was very well thought through and I think the story was really good.
Overall Review
Best Point: Plot
Worst Point: Typos/Spelling
Rating: 4.5 out of 5 stars plus an upvote
2. crazygoing-panda:
See I think your fic is pretty good but the fact that it lacks a few material makes it a bit usual. Try inserting some puns. Like both Sehun and Jackson being savage. If not then try to add a bit of heat up between the m and f leads. Like Sehun accidentally falling on top of her at their first meet.
Also try to make your F lead look a bit unique , like make her seem out of the world for some boys.
Other than that it is perfect.
Rating- 3.5/5
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