Yehet!! Congratulation my lovely dongsaeng.. Hoeeek.. LOL.. How i wish chanyeol and kai will lovey dovey again.. Miss ChanKai Moment as much as i miss TaoHun moment.. Coz right now it seems lack of skinship in EXO.. LOL #evilmind..
Next TaoHun okay baby.. ROFL.. <3
Chapter 1: YAY YOU DID IT!! XDD
Congratulation on your first ff! It's a good start!!! Sadly, it's so short so I don't really know what to comment.... .-.
Ok.....hmm.... I think you should work more on description about what the characters feel to add more depth in your story. GIVE YOUR BEST POETIC DESCRIPTION !!! I KNOW YOU ARE AN EXPERT AT THAT!! AND PLEASE ADD MORE CHAPTERS IN THE FUTURE HOHOHOHOHO!!! CHANKAI 4EVER!! KEEP WRITING!! GO! GO! GO!
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