First Kiss

Description

"If you choose the right person to share it with, it is like having something soft and warm around your heart, and something that makes your stomach spin."

Foreword

Hello! *waves*

To be honest, I'm pretty excited, because even though it's not my first fanfiction, this is my first time publishing a fanfiction written in English (I used to write and publish a lot in Hungarian = my native language). ^^

I would be really happy to see any kind of feedback from you; if you don't want to write long comments, just give me points like "×/10", okay? With that you'll let me know whether you liked my fic or not, and I'll be able to improve in the future. (:

Thank you in advance.
Natsuki

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blueaoichan
#1
Chapter 1: so cute and adorable ><
kpopfan015 #2
Chapter 1: soooo CUTE!!!!!!!!!!
i cant..........
i just cant my feels BLAHHH!!!! *dies*
Jishubunny
#3
Chapter 1: Nice and cute <3
inftocean
#4
cute! ♥
plume-de-chine #5
Adorable!! ahhhhh i just don't have word for to describe how great that was!
I really hope you post again. ^^
All-Rise-Silver
#6
I would give it a 12345/10 =D So cuuuuuute :3
Bunta_x3 #7
CUUUUUUUUUUUUUUTE <3
MissInspirit_
#8
THAT'S SO CUTEEEE :DDD<br />
aaaw naughty ricky ...we all know you just love his kisses too much xDDD<br />
the last sentence is so cute :D<br />
love this :3
enabelilove
#9
You cant tell at all that english isnt your native language. Very very cute :3
angelsmiles
#10
So. Cute.