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JOCELYN SAYS!

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name here!

alias • goes here.

availability • not available.

status • none.

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face claim • n/a.

backup • n/a.

age • none.

uality • n/a.

paramour • none.

strikes • none.

JOCELYN SAYS!

this is my character. i'm not sure what i can possibly say but feel free to add him into your application if you'd like! a few things about him below since i accidentally deleted the blog so i'm remaking the application.

— a new tenant who just moved in, literally.

— protective, obsessive, loyal, easily jealous, clumsy, faithful,secretive, trustworthy.

— tells everyone he doesn't have a family.

— jyp trainee : since 13 years old.

— a phenomenal dancer, plays the guitar and likes to rap.

— thinks more than he likes to talk.

— thinks he's into guys but he's only dated girls so far.

— best friend named jo seol who he nicknamed cinderella.

— works a bunch of part-time jobs, currently a barista at a cafe.

— is on his family's bad side.

— loses everything at least once, breaks a lot of things on accident.

nam junseok!

alias • jocelyn.

availability • 6/10.

status • chosen.

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face claim • lee hyunwoo.

backup • n/a.

age • 19.

uality • biual.

paramour • undecided.

strikes • none.

JOCELYN SAYS!

review!

application:

i just wanted to start by saying if you're going to change the colors, would you mind changing it to darker or more paler colors? cause colors such as the bright blue hurt my eyes. also would you mind making the colors consistent? too many colors causes clashes and easy distracts. also the personality section is in a different font and size from the rest . . .

ethnicity:

out of curiousity, is it her mother who gives her the american side? and how does the tiny portion of japanese play in? since reading your application it just seems she lived there. it's not necessary to know for th estory but i'm just curious.

personality/background:

from reading these two sections, i felt this empty feeling. i don't think i learned anything about ji except for the fact that she's got a lot of siblings, tough and lived in several places. i feel like each section is missing something that can be elaborated especially the personality. i honestly got nothing from reading it, all the stuck was she's tough. i noticed other things like the transition from tough to nice but that doesn't really say much in my opinion.

habits:

there's a few habits missing. there should be six at least.

plotline:

so i read your plotline but it seems it already happened? i mean as soon as the story starts — your plotline ends since all it has to it is the fact you were forced to move out and into the share house. i feel that i would have nothing to go off with just that.

questions!

i think i would allow pets in secret which your character doesn't seem to mind breaking the rules so it's fine!

comments!

— there's so many siblings that i'm lost. crying cause who courts people with a black rose. anyways thanks for sending in your application and i hope i didn't come off too mean or anything!

— i would go back and check the things that i touched upon when i reviewed your application. i feel like if some were fixed that it would improve the application.

wu ji!

alias • eunmi.

availability • 8/10.

status • reviewed.

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face claim • baek sumin.

backup • yoon ahra.

age • 19.

uality • straight.

paramour • yoon jeonghan.

strikes • none.

JOCELYN SAYS!

im seowoo!

alias • sam.

availability • 6/10.

status • reviewing.

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face claim • eom saeah.

backup • min hyorin.

age • 23.

uality • straight.

paramour • kim sunggyu.

strikes • none.

JOCELYN SAYS!

kim suyeon!

alias • nik.

availability • 7/10.

status • reviewing.

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face claim • jungmin.

backup • searin.

age • 23.

uality • straight.

paramour • jung hoseok.

strikes • none.

JOCELYN SAYS!

dong jinhyuk!

alias • jocelyn.

availability • 9/10.

status • reviewing.

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face claim • kang haneul.

backup • jung jungyoung.

age • 22.

uality • homoual.

paramour • wang kayee.

strikes • none.

JOCELYN SAYS!

jacqueline hsu!

alias • jojo.

availability • 8/10.

status • reviewing.

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face claim • park boyoung.

backup • shin sekyung.

age • 19.

uality • panual.

paramour • park chanyeol.

strikes • none.

JOCELYN SAYS!

l ee jinhyeon!

alias • azzalea.

availability • 3/10.

status • reviewing.

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face claim •oh seungyoon.

backup • park kiho.

age • 22.

uality • biual.

paramour • roommate

strikes • none.

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YearsOfUs #1 Jul 22, 2015 17:09:50

Chapter 2: I was wondering did you get my app?

Layni17 #2 Jul 21, 2015 10:00:13

I'm sorry I promised my application forever ago. For some reason my character isn't coming to me as normally, so I don't know when and if I'll be able to finish. I hope to have the app done soon, I'll try my best!

Lovingyoudeeply #3 Jul 20, 2015 06:15:27

im still doing my application and i have to do it slowly because im busy with school and my ideas come and go. ;;

reminiscent #4 Jul 19, 2015 21:43:19

　　 ↱ announcement。　
hey everyone, thanks for all the support and applications. the deadline is slowly being decided upon, i think i'm going to be releasing a date soon but the whole point of this comment is to apologize. some people sent their applications in way, way long ago but i keep pushing it off due to not having the time. now that i spared a few moments, i only got one review finished since my computer keeps slowing down and crashing on me. so i'm going to have to delay the reviews for a bit longer. my goal is to finish the reviews before the end of this week though so let's cross our fingers and hope i finish it this time. i hope people can be patient as i'm truly apologetic for being so slow but thanks for sticking with me. <3

-paradiselost #5 Jul 17, 2015 13:17:33

Chapter 1: gonna apply~ as a guy ^^

please wait for me authornim~

-exciting #6 Jul 15, 2015 10:30:21

Chapter 2: hi jo :)
anyway, i was wondering.
were you updating something private often?
i often times see it being updated with out any visible updates.
p.s. i've applied and i hope you like him!

headless #7 Jul 14, 2015 07:13:43

Chapter 2: oh, what exactly is the "availibility" for –

predilection #8 Jul 13, 2015 16:50:27

Chapter 2: So, Soeun is not your character? Then perhaps she is a character who plays the landlord?

And Jo, how to differentiate a new tenant and old tenant? If theyre old then since when should they have been living in the shared apartment?

calmjong #9 Jul 13, 2015 12:32:14

hey! :) I was hoping if you could take me out of the review because I don't wish to apply anymore! it's just that I probably shouldn't apply for fics like that (not girlgroup related etc) thanks!

rackets #10 Jul 10, 2015 12:45:27

i've never applied for an apply fic before but this looks really cool! i might give it a shot. regardless, good luck!