Title : Concealed Identity

Author : KaihleeLo

Story views   :  894

Story subscribers :  26

Story upvotes  :  13

Story Comments :  11

Story Type :  Story

Story Length :  Chaptered

Characters  :  Lee Minho (Oh Changwoo), Yoo Seungho (Yeo Wootae), Song Jae Rim (Yi Yeong), Lee Seunggi (Moon Chuho), Song Joongki (Heo Jun Seung), Park Minyoung (Han Jaehee), Jung Ryeowon (Lee Hwa Young), Moon Chae Won (Princess Soh Soo), Shin Minah (Mae Bong Chae), ETC

Genre : Romance, Angst, Action, Drama, Tragedy, Mystery

Status : On-going

Warnings : None

Story Summary : In the decades of the 1800s during the Joseon Dynasty, six teens were introduced to change the nation of South Korea for their own benefit and will. Oh Changwoo (Lee Minho) is the common rebellious teenage from a well-respected family. He dreamed to rule the citizens of Jongun Gu someday and to make changes to the laws written for the people. But the path he chose wasn't as smoother as he had planned. That was when he met his life time friends and rivals: Yeo Woota (Yoo Seunghoo), Yi Yeong (Song Jae Rim), Moon Chuho (Lee Seunggi), and Heo Jun Seung (Song Joongki).

Behind each boy's innocent appearance, there was a secret, an identity in which each concealed and hide from one another upon their first encounter. 

Concealed Identity is a dialogue-style story written about the strong brotherhood between the appearance of the first five, then later six, boys. Each will experience happiness, sadness, grieve, betrayals, and death.

Review:

Title: 8/10

The title isn't used as often as other titles which makes it good! It's also quite eye-catching for someone who likes a sense of mystery.

Foreword/Description: 14/15

I can't say anything else other than amazing! The way your description is makes the reader want to read the story. Which is exactly what authors aim for! A+!

Appearance: 8/10

I enjoyed how you took the time to make you description and foreword look nice and presentable. 

Plot: 15/15

You seriously did a perfect job with creating an enjoyable historical fic~

Originality: 9/10

Considering there arent' many fics like yours, I have to say you did a really, really good job in writing this. I honestly believe this could be the next script for a movie, aha!

Flow: 15/15

No dragging, no random events, and no 'wait, wtf' moments.

Character Development: 10/10

I know it has 'development' in it but I mostly rate on how the characters is (which may be developement?? Idk). I really loved how each character had their own set personality and all had a specific role in the story. They all seemed like they belonged there, one way or another.

Enjoyment: 14/15

I got hooked from the description itself so I knew it was going to be a story worth reading. 

93/00

Reviewed by: The_BlackStar

THIS REVIEW WAS FROM MY OPINION ONLY, PLEASE DO NOT BE OFFENDED OF HOW I GRADED THIS. WE SHOULD ALL TAKE JUDGMENT (GOOD OR BAD) AND TAKE IT IN A POSITIVE WAY TO HELP US IMPROVE IN LIFE! :)