Title : Broken Veins

Author : marshmallowduizhang

Story views   :  10632

Story subscribers :  659

Story upvotes  :  111

Story Comments :  340

Story Type :  Story

Story Length :  Chaptered

Characters  :  EXO OT12

Genre : Angst, Horror, Romance, Thriller

Status : On-Going

Warnings : Mature

Story Summary :  Kyungsoo only took the job at the mental hospital because he wanted to understand.
Kai only kills because he can't.

Author's Message :  Thanks to everyone who reads this, subscribes & upvotes~ <3

Review:

Title: 9/10

I really like the title. It really grabs the reader's attention with curiosity of what the story is about!

Foreword/Description: 14/15

The description is kind of short but the best story's usually give you less info so you could read it. Good job!

Appearance: 7.5/10

I'm not sure why, but I feel as though it's a bit...plain? 

Plot: 15/15

Honestly, if there was an option to rate higher, I most definitely would! I absolutely love this story and can't wait for the remaining chapters to be added!

Originality: 10/10

You don't see a psychotic Kai and volunteering-at-a-mental-hospital Kyungsoo everyday. Amazing work with creating the plot!

Flow: 15/15

The storyline went never dragged and everything that's been said and described fits perfectly in that moment.

Character Development: 8.5/10

Considering it's still on-going, character-development is still in store.  

Enjoyment: 14/15

I honestly ship Kaisoo from the core of my heart and reading this story has been satisfying my Kaisoo feels, aha! Keep up the good work!

96/100

Reviewed by: The_BlackStar

THIS REVIEW WAS FROM MY OPINION ONLY, PLEASE DO NOT BE OFFENDED OF HOW I GRADED THIS. WE SHOULD ALL TAKE JUDGMENT (GOOD OR BAD) AND TAKE IT IN A POSITIVE WAY TO HELP US IMPROVE IN LIFE! :)