when i'm alone (i'd rather be with you)

Description

It was like Joon Jae had been a blank colouring book and Takuya had come in splashing colour - vibrant, pulsing colour - on to every page, crossing all the lines, but filling every white page up. And now Joon Jae knew what that was like, he couldn’t turn back and pretend like he didn’t know how it felt when someone filled your heart until it was so full it felt like it was squeezing past the slats of your ribcage.

Foreword

I FINISHED SOMETHING FOR ONCE IN MY LIFE IT'S A MIRACLE. this is heavily indicative of what takujae trash i am. mistakes are all mine (and i'm sure there are a lot of them pls forgive me). based on the preview of the final?? title taken from childish gambino's 3005.

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Sway10
#1
Chapter 1: Veeeeeery nice!! I once read your story in the past, and now I found it again! ^^ Well done!
xingthighs
#2
Chapter 1: This is really good!
jargueta25 #3
Chapter 1: This made me so happy❤
VieVIP
#4
Chapter 1: OMG THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR WRITING THE ULTIMATE BEST TAKUJAE EVER THELOVER SHOULD JUST HIRE U FOR THE ENDING THO BECAUSE HDHXJSKXJSJXCDHCS /DROWN IN FEELS

each and every words here is so beautifully written omg this is truly masterpiece ㅠㅠ♡♡♡♡ so perfect I love this fic so much sobssss ㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠ♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡
The kisss the kiisssssssssss /sobbing eternally
takujae with their kids will be the cutest thing ever sobss their gross dads who just love each other too much shxhdjjsjx ㅠㅠ♡♡♡♡♡

AGAIN, THANKS FOR THIS BEAUTIFUL PIECE OF HEAVEN I LOVE U

p.s please write more takujae lol sobss
bunnycheek
#5
Chapter 1: THIS IS SO GOOD OMFG WHY CAN'T THIS BE THE DRAMA'S ULTIMATE ENDING?!!?!??!
You are so talented making me squeal so much whilst making my heart and stomach are fluttering with butterflies also~
ASDFG- I love you so much for writing this so thank you <3
P.S. That epilogue is probably the cutest thing I've ever read in my life >~<
Keep up the fantastic masterpieces of your fanfics! <3
f_u_t_u_r_istic
#6
Chapter 1: I'm reading this after watching the finale and asdfgkkgdyjbfshv i'm drowning in feels
this fic is wonderful ♥
Beautifully written!
fortyoneseconds
#7
Chapter 1: THIS IS HOW I WANT THE DRAMA TO HAPPEN. /cries
This is lovely, I love how you captured both Takuya and Joonjae's personas so well.