When Two Seasons Meet

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His smile is bright, was the first thing that entered Minho's head that day, when he met Taemin just as he was about to leave Earth, finished bringing Winter and ready to bring it away. They had met years ago, long before man existed, just as Earth did. Minho was brought to existence, and was assigned to bring Winter to the Earth, and he did. He brought the cold snow with him and walked around the Earth for days, weeks, months, and when he felt he was about to leave, he met beautiful, bright Taemin, who brought Spring. And every year, he would return to let the snow fall, lonely, gloomy and cold, until he would meet the boy of Spring. 

This is a story that suddenly, a little painfully, popped in my head. This is written mainly for a writing contest I am entering, "Cold Hands, Warm Hearts," which can be found here. It is a cool contest, really. The plot of my story had entered my head as soon as I read one of the prompts (which will be mentioned later on), and I had immediately jumped off my bed and started writing this. It will probably have just a few chapters, I'm not exactly sure yet, but we'll see. It might end up shorter than I expect, though. 

This is going to be fun, and I hope you will enjoy this as much as I know I will. 

 

This amazingly beautiful poster was made by MusicChibi at Ahjussi & Chicken Graphic Shop. ♥

Dedicated to kawaiikimbap and COOkIesrOCkkeke. 

Foreword

"It is time for you to wake up." It's that voice again, the loud, smooth and relaxing voice that rings everywhere, yet when I open my eyes, I find no speaker. I sat up and stretched and yawned. Finally, after many months of sleeping, I'm finally allowed to wake up, to go down to Earth and make the flowers bloom and wake the hybernating animals. 

I gazed around me, lightheaded because of the bright nothingness, only light, no walls, no shadows, just light. But beneath me, are clouds in shades of pink and orange and yellow, but other than that, nothing. And there was no one but me, and only me. 

"When do I go?" I ask, speaking to no one in particular, but knowing perfectly well that someone, from somewhere, will answer. I look around for a moment, waiting for the voice, and finally, it replies, "Soon." The voice had no beginning nor end, it had no direction. I couldn't tell where it came from, from behind me, or beside me or above me. It was everywhere. 

And then a feeling, so overwhelmingly cold, so lonely and heart-clenching, so painful that it brings tears into my eyes, surges through me. I shut my eyes, feeling tears squeeze out of them and trickle down my cheeks, and when I open them, I'm on Earth, surrounded by snow everywhere, covering the trees and the homes of the people and their transporting systems, which, if I remember correctly, were called cars

The air was cold, like the feeling that lingered on my heart. It was that I hated most about my time, when that feeling comes as I am taken to Earth. It was the coldness, the loneliness, the pain. 

I start to walk, the snow crunching beneath my feet, my arms wrapping around myself in attempt to protect me from the cold. And then I search, not knowing where to begin. But usually, it's easy to find him, and I knew I needn't to search for long. 

And sure enough, I was right. There he sat, on the hood of a car, fidgeting with the hem of his faded blue shirt, head hanging low. And I smile at him, even though he couldn't see me, even though I doubted he knew I was there. 

"Minho!" I called, happy to see him, and he looks up, his frown turning into a smile. 

 

 

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SHINeeLove05
#1
Chapter 12: wow this was so beautiful and amazing, you made me cry so many times ;u;;
your imagination is great, you described all so amazingly <3
they're so romantic and their love is sooo precious and I'm so happy that they found each other again :')
even if just little there, JongKey were cute ^^ and I was so happy Taemin got to see Kibum and Minho JJong, that was touching, many parts were really touching..aww I just don't know what to write because i'm so bad with words but loved everything about this story ^^b and with perfect beautiful ending too :'))) yaaay
COOkIesrOCkkeke
#2
remember when we wrote about shinee
DoS_KAri
#3
I don't know if I should hate you or love you... It's really weird for me to have too many emotions at once. For starters I'm deeply touched, I loved their love story. It's so beautiful that it hurts (You used that phrase a lot, right?)
I had fun trying to figure out some things, that Minho was human for example. Oh, and the side story of Kibum and Jonghyun was cute too.
I feel bad for Onew, the whole thing wasn't his fault and he only wanted to be Taemin's friend. At first I thought that Onew was the voice, but when Taemin talked about Minho's replacement I knew it had to be him.
I found your fanfic a while ago, but I hadn't read it until now. I guess I wasn't ready xD I started it today and I couldn't stop until I finished it.
You're amazing :3 Looking forward to more. Fighting!
Julia91
#4
Beautiful story. So... sad at first, but so romantic. It has this aura :). When you read it, it's like you are there, in their world I seriously want to say more but I am too much touched. I will check your other fanfics. Again, amazing peace of work
kawaiikimbap
#5
(ugh, seriously? eue; It had to say I reached the limit when I only had one more thing to say? XD;)

Your Grade: 5 ♥
kawaiikimbap
#6
;_______________________________; You'll have to give me a moment, I just, I can't...augh. I'm. Speechless. /le cries ;u;
I had so much I wanted to say, but as I read more and more, it all just floated from my mind. I don't remember most of it now. T.T But I'll try to leave you a good comment nonetheless. ♥
I love fantasy stories. ;_; And I love the feel of the story, the whole atmosphere of it. It's kind of mystical, and wonderful. And I'll admit I was a little confused about what Taemin had forgotten and what he could remember, but that works because it just made me understand his feelings better, because he was confused too. :3
I realized quite a bit before it was actually said that Minho was a human...but it wasn't really until Taemin was on Earth as a human as well that...it hit me and suddenly made SO MUCH SENSE why Minho knew so much about humans. Because I'd been wondering, if they can't see humans, how the heck could Minho possibly know all that? XD So when I realized, it was super cool. OuO
I was so sad that they couldn't all meet. ;_; And when Taemin hated Onew. To be honest I was suspecting the voice was Onew maybe, but I was wrong. XD Obviously. That fits so well though, him replacing Minho as winter, seeing as their birthdays are both in December! ^-^ I wonder what the person who replaced Taemin is like. ^-^
I cried when they remembered everything again. ;__; ♥ And I was so happy when they saw JongKey together. If only it had been two-way. ;^; *sigh*
This fic is SO beautiful. ;__; It amazed me. I love it so much.
As for the actual writing...I love your style. In some ways it actually reminds me of my own, but that's beside the point. XD There were some grammatical errors, but nothing I can't overlook, except for one thing. As a grammar nazi, I'm really bothered by the way you switch back and forth between past and present tense. >u<
However, despite inconsistent tense, this story is so amazing that I'm just going to have to give you top marks. ^-^
FFiolet #7
Sweetie. I have no idea what to say. *opens mouth, though*
You, once again, made me stop looking at the reality and live in the fantasy world again.
The world with Taemin and Minho in it, depressing and happy...
My god, I feel like going all insane for having the story an end like that.
Positive, of course! I think that I wouldn't imagined it better. *spazzing* :D
Before I have to go (again), I want to say some things.
First, if this story isn't going to win this contest, than I'll eat my shoes.
Because WAUW, O_O I've never read something good in my life so far.
Second, I love you for being the writer of this story. Nobody could've described those things better than you.
Third, I did my best to make this comment long. I read my front page and sorry, but I'm off on AFF. Yet, I think this story DESERVES a long comment. (and more comments and subscribers :P)
Fourth, my last sentences for you; Stay focusing on what your goal is, and I'm sure your other stories will end up great and BEAUTIFUL! *shifting on her chair*
Oh! *dances around*. :D Kamsahamnida!
Byoleta #8
Wow. This is so good! I kept reading and reading and my imagination lived along side the storyline. This is my favorite contest story, and I know that will not change so soon. Because what you have written, is a beautiful, amazing, lovely, incredible, awesome, pretty and breathtaken story, and I'm glad I've read it. It has opened my fantasy, it has opened my desire and opened a way of looking different to life. Minho's story is so sad. You can almost feel he really has gone through it. That is what life is. Thank you, for writing and show us your skills of blooming and warming our hearts. You are my hero! :) I sure hope that this story is going to win. Nicely and amazingly done! Thank you.
SanaKyu
#9
Out of all the entries for the contest, this is my favorite, if you win or not either way, know that you did an amazing job (but I hope you win! <3 )