Baited and Bated Breath

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I am Kim Jongdae, an English major with a superior vocabulary and sense of entitlement because I AM KIM JONGDAE. The Kim Jongdae who won ‘Seoul’s Highest Achievement in the Literary Arts’. The Kim Jongdae who’s been offered internships internationally and praised for my literary responses on hundreds of author’s manifestos. The Kim Jongdae who got accepted into one of Korea’s top universities with a full scholarship, with only presenting a short lecture about the effects of Imagist poetry in Europe during the 1900s.  

The Kim Jongdae who just listened to his professor call him out on his grammar techniques.  

 

 

Foreword

I'm super nervous right now, dear lord.

I've been writing various kinds of stories for awhile, but this is the first time I've actually made a fan fiction before.

Plus, I read a bunch of it, so why not try writing one?

 

EXO is like my precious child and Kim Jongdae is my super precious child and KIM JONGIN IS TOO PRECIOUS FOR THIS WORLD

It just explains how this happened in the first place lol

I'm not sure if I'll make this NC-17 or not (dunno if I can write Y SCENES) 

BUT yeah, this is essentially my first fan fiction so please be gentle....I'm soft....

Please enjoy and leave any comments telling me if you guys liked it or not :)

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dramaticpainter #1
Are you alive author? Are you okay? Are you sick? I hope you're okay it's been a long time since I heard of you
Please can you just give a sign if you're still alive ?
I'm probably worrying for nothing but since last time you fainted and idk what happened to you just idk sorry
dramaticpainter #2
Chapter 14: aww poor jong.. they're gonna be eaten alive in the middle of nowhere xD
No but seriously it's becoming dark and darker how do you still entertain the fluff ?? Like are you genious ?
In some chapter I enjoyed how it when from sassy af to cute n romancy x) now it's from angst to romancy xD at least that's how I see it
I love how you write girl :) keep it up ! THANKS YOU
Hope you're taking care of yourself
dramaticpainter #3
Chapter 1: Omg this look AMAZING ! ahsjnjndfssbfsk xD I love the character everything xD so funny *clap* *clap* *clap* *clap*
Jongdae I love you :3
Hastamasta #4
Really enjoy the story so far! The characters are dimensional and the plot is steady. Thank you and please enjoy continuing to write!!!!
gmont18 #5
Chapter 13: This is mostly for the people commenting, my dad always wanted me to be a teacher, my sister wanted me to study design because she is an architect, some friends tried to push me into law because they said I would be a good lawyer. But at the end of the day my future is mine and the only person able to decide what I want in my life is me. My pasion is theatre. Till this day I have people tell me I made a stupid choice when I became a theatre major they say I have no future in it they say I'm never going to find a job, and in all honesty they might be right who knows, but I would feel worst knowing I never tried to chase my dream. Life is unexpected and I think the worst way of living it is with regrets, sure we all want to make money and be successful but if you love something enough you can find a way to become successful at it. I guess all I'm saying is to chase your dreams and live your life for yourselves, it's OK to be a little selfish once in a blue moon. ^_^
KreiKrei #6
Chapter 12: Same thing is happening to me, my father is forcing me to pursue law but i know in my heart that i won't be good enough for law and i'm just really afraid that i'd disappoint them more since my father has never given me any choice to do something i want, something i like. He wants me to be independent but won't give me the chance to make my own decision and make my own mistakes. I want them to be proud of me but not in the way that i would be robbed of my happiness and freedom. This chapter really affects me and i can really relate to it well, sorry for being emotional on my comment.
RainSound3 #7
Chapter 12: Tithe educational topic has always been a tough thing for me ;;
I wanna study design but they want something like doctor and I just ... You know I always cry everytime we talk about this. The worst part is the only science subject I'm interested is is psychiatrist and it's not an easy subject. Sometimes I'm just worried that what if I can't finish it what if I give up. But eventually I hope I at least finish the course ...
sehunwae #8
Chapter 11: HUEHUEHUEHUEHUE
brandionie #9
im gonna die from all the adorableness XD but srsly, great work with this story, the characters are amazingly dynamic and the story transitions so well. each character is like a story within it's own, but it doesn't take away from the main plot. GREAT JOB.
casey_chan11 #10
Chapter 9: HMMMM i wonder if Sehun and wufan will get together....but sehun looks like he don't need no man LOL~
keep up the great work author nim!!!! hwaiting! (^ - ^) /
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