Regret

Description

"It is better to regret something than to not attempt it at all." (G; 634 words)

Foreword

This is for a writing exercise for school. We were given vague plot, setting, and character traits, but I found it really hard to create the character appearance out of nowhere, so I based it on the person who I thought would fit the character the best.

 

Enjoy~

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veeveeandesu #1
Chapter 1: I don't know what this feeling is its not overwhelming but its nice its nice its niiiceeee its a little sad and tag at my heart because she's hurt it doesn't hurt but it hurts but It it it- and she's happy I'm so happy for herrr ;_;

personification of wind and sun and colors I liiiiike

Idk why but I like ankles crossed lazily I like . And her laugh I love it I love it no one to judge just laugh if you want laugh at anything just laugh for the sae of laughing omg its not a crime to do it if you feel like it so I so I love that <3 the whole atmosphere is so relaxed you portrayed this nicely

Honestly at first I thought the white furry thing was a bunny but I got sad after I realised what it was

Droplets of scarlet ... thousands of translucent thorns IDK WHY BUT I LIKE THIS IMAGERY ITS LIKE NOT GROSS ITS PRETTY ITS PRETTY HOW DID YOU GET THOSE WORDS IN SUCH A PRETTY ORDER

Cold ground pushed against her back I LIKE THIS TOO ITS LIKE THE GROUND IS SUPPORTING HER <3 LIKE YOU DID IT. YOU DID IT GIRL I GOT YOUR BACK (I feel like this wasn't intentional but thats OK you did somrthing unintentionally GREAT)

And the ending <3 <3 does it hurt? No. No she's bleeding but thatd OK it doesn't hurt she's happy sjes not hurting inside she's happy she's HAPPY WHAT IS PAIN OHHH BITTERSWEET ;_;

this moment was so nice to read. This style is a lot closer to my ideal style than styles you have written in previously so yeah <3

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