7 Days

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What happened in Hyukjae's past? Why did Donghae's brother get killed? Who were the people that captured Eri? Would Donghae be able to save her on time? In a short span of just seven days, secrets unravel, fears are confronted, and two former strangers face the climactic changes that the other brings into their life. (PG; AU; crime, mystery, action, angst; 7 chapters)

Foreword

disclaimer: the first chapter is not written by me. it is written by missxielan, as a result of the prompt i gave her: "You don't remember me?"

after i gave her feedback on the first chapter, and presented some possibilities for how i guessed the fic would turn out, she wanted me to write my own continuation to see how different our stories would be. basically, we both have a fic with the exact same first chapter, but everything else will be completely different (probably xD). this is not a competition or anything to see who writes it better, but to see how different they will be. so, feel free to check out her story "art and appreciation" as well, and tell us what you think :)

 

edit (16 april): this story has been resurrected from draft status! xD i made many changes to characterisation (mainly Hyukjae's) throughout all chapters, but the plot remains largely the same. this Hyukjae is a lot better than what i had before though, so please give him a try ^^

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257471 #1
Chapter 7: Thanks for sharing the story...Looking forward for your next project
EunHaeLove42 #2
Chapter 3: OK so that was different.
Why couldn't Kyuhyun recognize Hyukjae?

Loving this the more I read.
EunHaeLove42 #3
Chapter 2: So from what I gather from Siwon's actions Donghae does more than just paint? Hum!
EunHaeLove42 #4
Chapter 1: So far good start. I do think that Hyuk should've been a little more pissed off though. I mean to have the person that had accused you ask for a favor is just, really.

But still I really do like this chapter.
de_m00n
#5
Chapter 7: Finally everything clear. .. And they live happily ever after. . :D
257471 #6
Chapter 6: What hyuk?? Wow...is he plan all of these?? Or is it just coincident and hyuk put more seasoning into this??
Looking forward :)
de_m00n
#7
Chapter 6: I can't wait for the last day. . What will happen. .>_<