Chapter 1: Wow. Mind blown.
First, I like the writing style.
Second, you speak like you have experience but your a/n says it's random. How can one elicit such emotions out of random words and no memory behind it. Wow. I felt as if I could feel his heart beating in mine. Respect to you author nim.
Third, I like this, if that was't obvious before. :)
"You’ve changed in many ways for the better, and that’s why when I say ‘I do’ at the altar, I’ll be saying it with true meaning, I’ll be saying it meaning it forever, no matter what we go through; no matter what takes us down. Because we’ll go down together, and we’ll be fighting together. I’ll be with you every step of the way, fighting for you, and for me, and for us."<br />
This part made me cry, I totally cried. It's one of the words that showed me how much they love each other, remember my first comment ? I read it again, I didn't cry the first time I read it, but I did just now. ^^<br />
This is a really good story, you are capable of putting pressure into the words, giving it a necessary emphasis, I love this so much... ^^
So nice! I can imagine Donghae saying this~ if only he could say this to me. I'd be the most hated person on earth if he did~ hehehe DONGHAE OPPA SARANGHAE!!!!
So nice! I can imagine Donghae saying this~ if only he could say this to me. I'd be the most hated person on earth if he did~ hehehe DONGHAE OPPA SARANGHAE!!!!
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