Inflate

Month of Maia

Inflate

 

Inflate - expand or cause to expand by filling with air or gas

Word count - 445

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Taemin feels like dying. His throat was sore. His eyes were burning and his nose was running. All because of a late night movie. Ugh, how much he hated this. He’s only doing this for the sakes of his height! He could still clearly hear his brother, mocking him, calling him ‘Shorty’.

“Breathe- in with your mouth and out with your nose, okay?” The instructor’s faint voice brought him back to reality. “Okay, two at a time. Swim to me.” Great. How was he gonna held his breath when he has trouble normal breathing with a running nose?

This day was the worst, expect for the hot instructor across the swimming pool. Taemin was sure that guy’s checking him out. Not that he minded. But he was going to play hard, a little. Besides Minho was manlier, he’d to make a move first by Lee Taemin’s theory. And no, he didn’t know his name by searching in the instructors’ list.

“Okay, next.” (See what I did there? ^^)

Sadly, it was his turn next. Taemin turned away slowly- ily in his head – to the side of the pool. He could feel the elder’s eyes, following him. Taemin inwardly smirked. I’m glad I’m such a brat!

Taemin took a breath and dived into the water at a low speed, his head in the clouds- more like cloud Minho. For a while, he keeps swimming but then, he couldn’t move his legs, and he certainly couldn’t hold his breath anymore. Water invaded his nostrils as he tries to let out the air. He really felt like dying now. He was moving his body in panicky moves, his lungs burning and his vision becoming blurred. He felt someone grabbing him and moving along with him. He couldn’t think straight as he was scared and he literally took a strong grip out of fear- like a koala.

 The next thing Taemin knows, he was on the sloped side of the pool, coughing out water with all his might, still clinging to the person. He heard distinct voices and his vision was getting clear slowing.

“Breathe in, breathe out.” He heard a dark voice very near to him. Only then, he realized he’d been clung onto the person like a chimpanzee. Taemin half-jumped out of the embrace, feeling embarrassed. This was too far from playing hard.

He didn’t think twice as he turned around and left without a thank you. This was a very bad day but it was all worth it when he could still feel the elder’s burning gaze from behind.

“Hey!” “…Taemin… Right?”

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Wrote this in like twenty minutes, so, please excuse my mistakes. This is literally me in swimming class. Apparently, the instructors are strict ‘ahjjussi’s. >.<

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qiqoqi
#1
Chapter 4: Re read it again cuz i saw u link this on twitter. And how i wish there will be sequel to this. I love businessman ming.
TaemKay
#2
Chapter 7: Unexpectly , I hv found your stories.. kkk The part where they are kissing is so y...kk
Cephei #3
Chapter 10: I REALLY LIKE THIS!! I've been OBSSESSED with historical novels lately so you can only imagine my pleasure when I came across this update. I would love to see an expansion of this <:
5ever_SHINee #4
Chapter 9: Adorable gown !!!!! Wanna see Taeminnie like that ^^ keep updating sis i love those little things called love lol
Cephei #5
Chapter 9: THIS ONE WAS ADORABLE Of course Minho is the sweetest person on Earth until he's around Taemin and then he becomes this teasingly affection person and Taemin can't help but think Minho is a bully lool. Minho is such a sly dog - imagine Taemin's reaction when he realises that it's a couple photo shoot! As for a point of improvement, I would love to see more description. The dialogue is great, but what about Taemin's clothes and Minho's reaction? Is he wearing a pressed shirt, a pleated skirt that ends just above his knees and kind of makes Minho go wild? That sort of thing. Maybe you could describe Minho's neighbourhood, and how Taemin feels intimidated by Minho's house (if that is in his character). Your prose is wonderful to read, so don't be afraid to slow down and share details with readers ^__^ Cheers! (and yaaay shinee!! maybe we'll see more 2min fics on aff too!)
qiqoqi
#6
Chapter 8: uwa uwa uwaaaa it's so cuuuteeeeee. uuh taeminnie. you're such a great author but why there is not much subscriber?
canarydreams
#7
Chapter 8: Yea~ why stop there when you can add an additional steamy scene loljk. Anyway, regarding the chapter entitled "Repair"... I was surprised to learn that they're both robots. You update fast too. :)
5ever_SHINee #8
Chapter 6: Why you stopped here
CarrotOmNomNom
#9
Chapter 5: This is so cool :o it would be amazing as a chaptered fic. The entire concept is so intriguing and I can only imagine how amazing the entire backstory would be.
5ever_SHINee #10
Chapter 4: Of course they r legends lol rest well sis :)