Dye

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A lone stylist, living his life in an out of the way hair shop rarely sees the same customer twice, let alone a regular. Just Navi fluff, a touch of angst and lots of hair.

 

Entered into Cryptic Critics - A VIXX Mini Fanfic Contest

Foreword

Pure fluff ahead <3

Please enjoy <3

 

UPDATE: This story is now posted on my AO3 account: thatstarlitsky

UPDATE 2: Entered into Cryptic Critics - A VIXX Mini Fanfic Contest

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annethundr05 #1
Chapter 1: Ugh my heart is so soft, like jello. This was so cute and fluffy, staring my Navi I'm just so happy. No kudos to you for this.
Sinii92 #2
Chapter 1: Cute story. I really like it.
senritsu #3
Chapter 1: You do such good floof
Amalya #4
Chapter 1: D'aw. This was delightfully fluffy and it played out so very nicely as well. ^_^ I really loved the way you wrote Wonshik in the beginning with his daring spirit and the love of trying new hairstyles until it all came crashing down with disaster which, as luck would have it, turned out to be serendipitous as well. heh The first time he met Hakyeon, I adored the man, from his named chickens to his hairstylist's confidence to his persona and the way his home/shop smelled. All of it was just plain lovely. :D

And I especially liked seeing the way that their relationship continued to grow. You also gave us glimpses of things that happened outside, like Wonshik's girlfriend and the event that altered Hakyeon's life as well, but kept it delightfully focused on them. I suspected what happened with Hakyeon and I wasn't exactly disappointed, but I was a bit annoyed with Wonshik for not reciprocating at that time. Doobus... -_- lol

I will say that Hakyeon's reactions to all of Wonshik's hair styles and dyes were priceless. That Chablue turned Secret Night one was particularly telling, but Wonshik's reactions were just as adorable. It was obvious he was continuing to fall hard and everything was cute and fluffy until his thoughts turned in an entirely different direction in the kitchen (later in the story), which kind of pulled me out a bit because it was so unexpected but not bad. hah

And then the moment that everything just clicked like it should have. I flailed (on the inside mind you) but I was grinning like an idiot. hehe Very well done. :D

There were a couple typos but nothing that detracts from being able to read it. I am curious why you end a lot of your dialogue sentences with commas though. Even though it's at the end of the utterance. Beyond that, awesome read!
SecretAccount #5
Chapter 1: This is really adorable! ^-^ :D
VIPDragon #6
Chapter 1: This was AMAZING!!! I don't really read fluff stories, and I'm not fond of one-shots...but I'm glad i decided to read this. I love it so much!!

Great work, Author-nim!! ^-^
delonihanis #7
Chapter 1: This story so good and fluffy ><
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