This is such a sweet piece, I am smiling while I typed this comment. The nonexistence of names in this pieces made it even more...well, how should I say it...dreamy-like? It made the story flexible for anybody who would like to ship whom with whom.
As for me, I prefer the style of your writing because it simply showcases the daily life of a married couple, a very humane one. I like how the wifey just got angry at the broken hot shower because let's face it, broken hot shower after a long day at work? I would lash out too at anyone in the house ^^
The thoughtful act of the husband? It was surprisingly simple, it was believable.
Writer-nim, I applaud you for sticking to reality despite the cottony feeling I got from reading this. Awwww the sweetness of cotton candy.
Comments